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    jaybay239113 years ago
    回復 Breuno

    Your doing a great job and I like the direction you've taken it. Hopefully you can keep balance of the narration from the simulation / reality, and not allow Eldrian to get to OP or things to get to whacky, without buildup. Really enjoying the story so far.

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    jaybay239113 years ago
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    Fantastic novel, thoroughly enjoying the read. It might be slow for some but I truly enjoy the pacing. The MC is believable and not OP from the get-go which truly annoys me. Great read, so far, keep it up!