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Fahrenx

Fahrenx

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2019-03-07 加入Albania
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  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
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    Cardinal sin of the 3rd chapter killed the book before it even started...why would you 'sign post' the events like that.... would you waste time reading a revenge novel if the 1st chapter was betrayal and the 1800th chapter was the revenge ending...??? I read how this novel starts....and by chapter 3 you tell me the events that happen in the middle and how it ends...+ in the title... I dnt care where mc sticks his dick. you killed all mystery and suspence..... you better make mint excuses in the comments as to why people should care about the in-between of this novel, because its ultimately pointless now.....

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
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    if you enjoy bdsm or choking, you might like this because it will never have a "feels good" moment where you actually root for the MC to succeed if you dont.... the MC is far too unstable and selfconcious of what other people think... this novel should be called "isekai without confidence" because without it, he kills the young and dumb then proceeds to have a 30 chapter monologue on mortality or an obvious mental breakdown over and over and over..... how are people telling me this is character growth??? same mental handicap over and over. Atleast Supreme Magus had the counterbalance to avoid constant depression...this has nothing so it has to take copium 3 times a day... it's also quite sad on the imagination that the "sword god" only weilds a large nail as a weapon for the majority of what I read...you can do better...

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
    回復 VasiliosReid

    not really character development when mc just makes same mistake over and over...

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
    回復 Fahrenx

    chapter220 for quest 2 to end. they describe 100s of quests. this pace....

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
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    man is this a messy novel, so much happens in the 1st 100 that the storyline progress blurs, you forget alot because their is no break in-between, nor is there quest rewards given??just penalties and loot... chain of garbage. what quest they are up to? what stats they have? what's the max stats cap? why the cap change? (you have to question this because MC gets like 500 million stats he now uses as currency?)

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
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    standard cultivation. if you're in the mood for it.

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
    回復 tortle

    then the story turns harem and goes downhill.

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
    回復 Fahrenx

    dear lord this is the one the MC gets brainwashed early and never gets his own identity. no thanks. Pushed and pulled, op vs trash but weak againt plot. this is not a fulfilling story. it's not even a story about the MC. he's a mouse in a maze and characters that get made up on the spot dictate the MC direction. how can a reader invest empathy or even understanding the MC when little bye-bye forget me powder is a plot point. makes transmigration pointless. decion making pointless.

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
    回復 shinigami8671

    the fact that you had to respond 4 times to the same conclusion is the proof. the bipolar character, intended or not, is what readers perceive in the free chapters which are ment to hook an audience to pay more to continue. I will reread for specific points i had issue with at a later date.

  • Fahrenx
    Fahrenx2 years ago
    回復 Goodzillla

    harem 4 sure nty.