It's good for a CN but Danzo would not politely ask him neither will Hiruzen take action against because of him. That Scene completely broked my immersion.

Man this is one of the best translated fanfic I've ever read, most authors don't even bother fixing small mistakes which can turn off people, it made me skimmed through all the chapters. Stuck with this bad habit now ever since i started reading on webnovel. Though I don't think I found any mistake except the slight AU element. I remember Shisui being way younger. Anyway I enjoyed reading it, I've always wanted to improve some of the MTL fanfic i like but I'm too lazy to even bother editing someone else's work.

Not bad. The translation is well made, but it needs to refine some details like the repetition of last names. Anything than that is pretty much perfect.

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Its a fun read. With the mc being a hard worker, there are some creative applications of basic jutsus in fights. The mc is able to talk to people and dialouge does not seem bad and too forced. Overall, is a fun read and not a waste of time. I hope this doesn't get discountinued.

amazing translations and a nice story in itself. although just sometimes, the Chinese way of speaking seeps in.

not much to say...I just don't like it..extremely slow progression, it gets boring way too quickly. I guess mc is just untalented at the beginning..even with his "cheat" he doesn't stand out much.

Can you tell me the Mtl name for this novel