Okay..... So I am new to writing. I know that I will make some or maybe many mistakes in this story but I still plan on doing my best. MC in my story will have a personality similar to Saitama but not completely as he will have his moments. He is not an Edgelord and will stay as A Hero for Fun or A real professional Hero just like Saitama. He will NOT turn Dark and Gloomy all of a sudden in the story and will NOT start massacring people just for some sick pleasure. He will be your Friendly neighborhood Baldy. Yes, You heard me right... He will be bald. There will be No Harem in any of my stories that I plan on writing in the future so this one doesn't have either. There will be some OCs that I will use to give more depth to my character and MC will not be the smartest man around; or rather he is going to be as dumb as Saitama. Him being dumb doesn't mean that he can be used like seriously he is the strongest man around, he ain't doing anything he doesn't like. And Yes; He will be the Strongest. Like literally, Nothing will work on him. If you are expecting any kind of science working in front of his overwhelming power then sorry to burst your bubble but nothing is going to work on him. MC will be considered among the likes of The One Above All, The Beyonder, The living Tribunal,etc. as his strength will equate to Infinity. He will be able to hold back his powers just like Saitama does and before you say there is no way someone can hold back infinity and infinity is infinity no matter how much you use it, Read the above statement about him not particularly someone that can be explained. He is just......out of the Ordinary. So if you guys are not interested in reading something like this then I guess it's better if you don't read this😅😅 I just hope you guys like my story. Peace✌️
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LIKEMost author that try Harem end up wanting to add too many too fast, preventing proper development. The numbers of Harem members isn't a problem, the time/development is.
ManofcultureQ_Q:I decided on my name when I was actually interested in harem. But after reading the lots of them..... I am not so sure anymore.image
the harem inst the problem its how they are introduced and mix with the flow of the story most author just want to add girls to add but that kills the rhythm of the story because they try to force it not think about how to add them in believably or a way that makes sense or has meaning, another is if you make a harem you have to actually choose who your mc will like by looks/sexual attraction and personality/ who they can get along with most author change them so much that all they are is a name and look that matches the person they are using ,it is harder to stay faithful to th original characters and make a real reason for them to be in a relationship ,than it is to force it a real writer goes through the effort or gives an actual reason why they fall for mc, check out soul evolution system on this site or fanfiction and you will see the mc has a harem but it is more believable and he chooses the girls not taking everyone himself that how to do a harem right
ManofcultureQ_Q:I decided on my name when I was actually interested in harem. But after reading the lots of them..... I am not so sure anymore.image
Harems are really hard to write. Most authors can't write 2 characters that are realistically friends, let alone have romantic chemistry and ability to maintain a relationship. Having to write 3 or 4 character all having at least the bare minimum chemistry to maintain a believable relationship takes time, effort, and skill. Start with basic relationships and if you stumble on an oppirtunity to make it work, then go for it if thats something you want, if it falls apart, that could be an interesting subversion of the trope. Have the MC pick up the pieces and maybe even salvage his most compatible partner.
ManofcultureQ_Q:I decided on my name when I was actually interested in harem. But after reading the lots of them..... I am not so sure anymore.image
I understand what you mean but I don't like writing about characters who already have their stories written. Basically, I don't like to write about characters who already have a backstory written. I like to write about oc's with similar powers to these characters but with a different story of their own. I might write something like that in the future though but in a different world than MCU. Maybe MHA perhaps.
ebrahim_bahadeli:why not just isekai Saitama to marvel it would be more fun + you wouldn't need to listen to people that say your oc is not himself or sth like that.
I just caught up to the story I've got to say you're doing a good job. Still if you ever try to wright sth like that don't go with MHA, too many people tried that and MHA world isn't really that diverse so most of the time you have to follow the plot but worlds like Marvel and DC don't have that problem because of their multiple timelines so you can use different plots without making things repetitive. Also regarding this story please show things from the MCs pov it's been 11 chapters but Betty and Fury have more dialogs than the MC.
ManofcultureQ_Q:I understand what you mean but I don't like writing about characters who already have their stories written. Basically, I don't like to write about characters who already have a backstory written. I like to write about oc's with similar powers to these characters but with a different story of their own. I might write something like that in the future though but in a different world than MCU. Maybe MHA perhaps.
Thanks for your idea. I will surely think about it. About the MC's POV, The next chapter is already his POV. I have already written that and might be posting in an hour or so. Thanks for reading my story I really appreciate it✌️✌️
ebrahim_bahadeli:I just caught up to the story I've got to say you're doing a good job. Still if you ever try to wright sth like that don't go with MHA, too many people tried that and MHA world isn't really that diverse so most of the time you have to follow the plot but worlds like Marvel and DC don't have that problem because of their multiple timelines so you can use different plots without making things repetitive. Also regarding this story please show things from the MCs pov it's been 11 chapters but Betty and Fury have more dialogs than the MC.