Okay..... So I am new to writing. I know that I will make some or maybe many mistakes in this story but I still plan on doing my best. MC in my story will have a personality similar to Saitama but not completely as he will have his moments. He is not an Edgelord and will stay as A Hero for Fun or A real professional Hero just like Saitama. He will NOT turn Dark and Gloomy all of a sudden in the story and will NOT start massacring people just for some sick pleasure. He will be your Friendly neighborhood Baldy. Yes, You heard me right... He will be bald. There will be No Harem in any of my stories that I plan on writing in the future so this one doesn't have either. There will be some OCs that I will use to give more depth to my character and MC will not be the smartest man around; or rather he is going to be as dumb as Saitama. Him being dumb doesn't mean that he can be used like seriously he is the strongest man around, he ain't doing anything he doesn't like. And Yes; He will be the Strongest. Like literally, Nothing will work on him. If you are expecting any kind of science working in front of his overwhelming power then sorry to burst your bubble but nothing is going to work on him. MC will be considered among the likes of The One Above All, The Beyonder, The living Tribunal,etc. as his strength will equate to Infinity. He will be able to hold back his powers just like Saitama does and before you say there is no way someone can hold back infinity and infinity is infinity no matter how much you use it, Read the above statement about him not particularly someone that can be explained. He is just......out of the Ordinary. So if you guys are not interested in reading something like this then I guess it's better if you don't read this😅😅 I just hope you guys like my story. Peace✌️

Writing quality is decent. Not the best as some grammar and spelling errors are there, but really easy to read. The updates are not on a set or regular schedule. They come out with huge gaps between some and others really close. The story develops REALLY SLOWLY! Nothing has really happened… the time it takes One Punch Man to explain his back story is essentially all of the current 12 chapters. The story is literally a rip off of one punch with a marvel setting. Unique but lazy choice. The MC does not come off as a Saitama, more like a ghetto version. The other brief character appearances so far are basic. There isn’t much of a description for the world yet other than it’s marvel, most likely MCU… author needs to not repeat something’s as much. Will write something, write it again, and then for some reason write it a third time from a different characters view. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?

This is a story featuring a guy who has one punch man’s abilities, simply incredible, dude, you write for fun, so do I, Just go at your own pace and remember… This is a fanfic you can do whatever you want! Try to explain things before you do though, it might rub a person the wrong way, and they might think it’s something when it’s not. I wish you luck author, I will be watching and rooting for you

I know you're a Watch one punch man. But you're misunderstanding Saitama He's not stupid at all, he just doesn't care. So don't try to make him stupid, this makes the novel annoying.

Hé ! Mais pourquoi il n'y a pas de fanfic de croisement entre Death Note et One Piece avec seulement le Livre de Death Note dans le monde de One Piece. Pas de personnage de Death Note, ça serait bien. Le MC en question n'aurait pas besoin de fruit du démon. Il aurait seulement besoin de s'entraîner au Haki (Haki des Roi pas d'importance vu le Livre du Death Note) et du coup pour le final : il aurait suffit d'écrire le nom de Robin comme quoi elle aurait traduit les poneglyphes et se suicider juste après Parce que on dirait que tu ne vas pas continuer avec cette histoire ce qui est dommage autant te donner une idée fanfic

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The writing quality is good. The author keeps it interesting and fun. Marvel has a thing for bald heads why not add one more bald head?Anyway this is a very good fanfiction. Read it!

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A very confusing story, starts weird and not very understandable. The grammar was excellent though and I couldn't find any mistakes. Unfortunately, for me, I couldn't understand what's really going on on the first few chapters so I dropped it.