The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

I saw grind and my first thought was Harry Squatter.

Don't mind me. Just giving the obligatory 5 star review. This story is a Gamer OC story set in a HP AU (aged up characters, some genderswaps, and expanded magic). It won't be an OP gamer. The focus of the story is mainly on the process of grinding skills and stats, along with the harem aspect of it.

good god another of these "Japanese MC" denseness...

he plot and writing itself is good. character conversation isn't too rigid or bland, there's some progress for sure but can't talk much about character development since it's only 4 chapter.but this author feels like reading too much Japanese LN, y'all know how Japanese MC are, low eq, dense etc. but at least there's some progress on it like I said before, and it's still 4 chapter. so you may like it, or maybe you wouldn't.. I know I wouldn't since I hate that kind of MC

I just read upto 3 chapters and i wanted to drop this novel more than ten times. like this is annoying and typical brainless novel. Mc is foodless,homeless-penniless, everything less and a crybaby, like with magic at least you won't be starved you can conjure water and atleast work in muggle world or do small jobs in magical world but no MC is an idiot. Don't waste your time in this novel.

One of the worst MCs in any Harry Potter fanfic story that I have ever read. Pathetic, dumb, super beta MC so do not bother unless you love stories like that.

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Initially I'd given this a 3.5 review and dropped it at chapter 4, put off by the excessive denseness of the protagonist, but someone recommended I revisit it and I'm really glad I did. He remains dense, but it does start getting better and less of a problem. I think part of the issue was I feel the author sometimes labors the foreshadowing a bit too much, further emphasizing the myriad of things the protagonist misses and amplifying his perceived level of denseness, which had really started to grate on me. However, I think this has started getting better and is more balanced in the more recent chapters. That is the only real criticism I can draw, everything else from the fun twist on the system premise, the plot, characterization, word choice, grammar, and long chapters are all fantastic. If like me you're put off by the protagonist at first, definitely try to stick with it. I don't think you'll be disappointed with the current trajectory. Whilst I still have some doubts as I'm still not that keen on this brand of comedy, I'm definitely looking forward to more.

I would like to like this story but the mc is way to passive and easily dominated by all the girls with romantic interest in him. They just push him around an he accepts it like it’s normal. Everything he does is because of the girls.

Idea is great but if fast became harem trash... More attention is paid to women than to magic and the system. When I first started reading I really liked the story about going back to school. The focus very quickly shifted from improving oneself and magic to women.

Some random guy gets the gamer system and starts banging all the chicks while claiming to have some inexplicable bond to each and everyone of them since their first meeting. The End.

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5 star is needed for this fanfiction, not only is it a proper grammar fanfic but is also one of the best gamer system aspects I have seen. i honestly can't wait to read more as the author makes the characters, personalities and conversation flow properly, the author makes it feel like there is emotion behind the characters words instead of no personality mc's that we all probably read about. At first the system might seem like a cultivation system at least to me, but it really isn't and I am glad that this system doesn't do the ordinary xp and levels like other gamers have.

This is just a placeholder review and not my actual ratings for this story. Author, will this have yuri/polyamory like in your Kitsune fic? It's an important question because, to be honest, was a big supporter of the Kitsune fic until I was bulldozed by the unexpected polyamory before the tag was included in the synopsis. Anyway, I hope you get round to answering my question.

it's OK, I liked it at first but it's kinda meh now for me, especially the yuri element I'm seeing so good story just not my taste

A really solid fanfic with most of what you would want for a casual read. Doesn't feel stilted and the characters do feel alive. Please keep it up!

my first review better appreciate i really like the idea

Very well written Pls don’t drop Update more often

5his is literally a diamond i hope author inspiration will last until the end of the fanfic🫶🫶