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Krypton71
Krypton71Lv121yr
2023-08-12 21:51

This is just a placeholder review and not my actual ratings for this story. Author, will this have yuri/polyamory like in your Kitsune fic? It's an important question because, to be honest, was a big supporter of the Kitsune fic until I was bulldozed by the unexpected polyamory before the tag was included in the synopsis. Anyway, I hope you get round to answering my question.

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

Daddy
4.6
78 Chs

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Daddy
DaddyAuthor

This is a harem story (it says so in the tags but I'll add something to the description as well). As for yuri, kind of? It's mostly going to be focused on the male MC (much more traditional harem than in Foxfire)

1yr
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DaoistatnnJf
DaoistatnnJfLv13

thx for warning, appreciate it when the author don't just ignore these questions too much dodging make or break it tags these days

Daddy:This is a harem story (it says so in the tags but I'll add something to the description as well). As for yuri, kind of? It's mostly going to be focused on the male MC (much more traditional harem than in Foxfire)
1yr
2
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Krypton bro is gonna brave one of this author's fics after the yuri cuckfest that was foxfire and goth girls? I'm not sure if you're brave or foolish

1yr
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LostM
LostMLv5

I saw grind and my first thought was Harry Squatter.

1yr

Tales_de_Mileto
Tales_de_MiletoLv1

good god another of these "Japanese MC" denseness...

1yr
Daddy
DaddyAuthor

Don't mind me. Just giving the obligatory 5 star review. This story is a Gamer OC story set in a HP AU (aged up characters, some genderswaps, and expanded magic). It won't be an OP gamer. The focus of the story is mainly on the process of grinding skills and stats, along with the harem aspect of it.

1yr
Siuuu
SiuuuLv4

I just read upto 3 chapters and i wanted to drop this novel more than ten times. like this is annoying and typical brainless novel. Mc is foodless,homeless-penniless, everything less and a crybaby, like with magic at least you won't be starved you can conjure water and atleast work in muggle world or do small jobs in magical world but no MC is an idiot. Don't waste your time in this novel.

1yr
Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13

he plot and writing itself is good. character conversation isn't too rigid or bland, there's some progress for sure but can't talk much about character development since it's only 4 chapter.but this author feels like reading too much Japanese LN, y'all know how Japanese MC are, low eq, dense etc. but at least there's some progress on it like I said before, and it's still 4 chapter. so you may like it, or maybe you wouldn't.. I know I wouldn't since I hate that kind of MC

1yr
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

One of the worst MCs in any Harry Potter fanfic story that I have ever read. Pathetic, dumb, super beta MC so do not bother unless you love stories like that.

1yr
Obsideon
ObsideonLv4

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1yr
Jose_matos
Jose_matosLv3

I would like to like this story but the mc is way to passive and easily dominated by all the girls with romantic interest in him. They just push him around an he accepts it like it’s normal. Everything he does is because of the girls.

1yr
literl010
literl010Lv1

Initially I'd given this a 3.5 review and dropped it at chapter 4, put off by the excessive denseness of the protagonist, but someone recommended I revisit it and I'm really glad I did. He remains dense, but it does start getting better and less of a problem. I think part of the issue was I feel the author sometimes labors the foreshadowing a bit too much, further emphasizing the myriad of things the protagonist misses and amplifying his perceived level of denseness, which had really started to grate on me. However, I think this has started getting better and is more balanced in the more recent chapters. That is the only real criticism I can draw, everything else from the fun twist on the system premise, the plot, characterization, word choice, grammar, and long chapters are all fantastic. If like me you're put off by the protagonist at first, definitely try to stick with it. I don't think you'll be disappointed with the current trajectory. Whilst I still have some doubts as I'm still not that keen on this brand of comedy, I'm definitely looking forward to more.

1yr
Twasasetup
TwasasetupLv2

Some random guy gets the gamer system and starts banging all the chicks while claiming to have some inexplicable bond to each and everyone of them since their first meeting. The End.

1yr
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