M_Static

with this story pace you will burn out pretty fast! too much water. you know Naruto, he knows naruto, we knows naruto so you can just skip most unnecessary explanations. at this pace if you ever try to finish this work it will take trice more chapters than original work. too dramatic without any movement.

you aren't sure? isn't it your ff?

i hate concept of sport festival in original work. organisers telling all criminals in whole Japan, names, faces and abilities of schoolkids isn't it dumb as fk?

Its horrible! in 100ch. we see MC acting ONLY once! Like it is story about actor and there is no acting at all. Anything but acting. Better go and read raw "Greatest Showman"

wow is MC even have role in this novel??? or we gonna skip most interesting part: acting on set?

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yep AT ruining tempo by adding all that shit. Just write how they stumble than right after write how our gr8 mc improvise

ffs so much water! i'm drowning

exactly