Item: The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]
Rating: 3.6
Author: Pekokopiko

PekokopikoLv131yr

2023-08-08 16:03

he plot and writing itself is good. character conversation isn't too rigid or bland, there's some progress for sure but can't talk much about character development since it's only 4 chapter.but this author feels like reading too much Japanese LN, y'all know how Japanese MC are, low eq, dense etc. but at least there's some progress on it like I said before, and it's still 4 chapter. so you may like it, or maybe you wouldn't.. I know I wouldn't since I hate that kind of MC

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

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