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Could have used Reparo
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Control your mind.
Read untill 7th chapter. World description is good. Story is good. CRİTİCİSM------------ The only problem is interactions. Mc seems to have no goals . İn the early chapters he wanted to be somthing more than a normal person with no purpose. But in the end of the day what he says and what he does are different. He became a "loyal" soldier with no own motives other then the fire nation itself. He became so selfles. And dont use the word "loyal" too much it started to sound like a dogs loyalty to its owners. Thats it it ,it has potantial. Keep up the story.
Too busy reading
Good
Good start