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DROPPED:Juvenile Entertainer

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Warning: Harem, system, slow-paced, CRINGE and system with a bad personality. This has been dropped. This is my first novel which had a lot of problems from the pacing, power scale and grammar. Read knowing that it has no end. To be a star is a simple Idea but to turn a boy that's been secluded from Society into one is much more difficult. Even if you took on his body you still felt his anxiety, insecurity and more. It's slow but worth it. _____________________________________________________ Authors Note: The novel you are about read contains strong language and some vivid sexual content The Mc is beta at the start as he is a character that suffers from anxiety due to his upbringing. Although it did take 23 chapters for the Mc to show visible growth that's just due to my naturally slow pacing. Don't expect too much, especially since this is my first time writing a novel. It's also best not to take seriously as I am just writing for fun and to just something to do on my downtime This novel will share a lot of similarities to other novels that I particularly love and mostly because I lack originality but it will be in my style. UPLOAD SCHEDULE Tuesday, Wednesday and Saturday

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Writing quality 4/5. nothing to complain. updates 4/5: good release rate. story:3/5 Lets be honest, he is "compared" to the last two that "had" this system pursues materialistic gain and fame. Two of the worst traits of humanity: vanity and greed. so this is a sold 2/5. Also the cliches, the unreal behavior of people and so on. Character: I am biased, one of the things I hate the most is the cliche power\system with its own ego, and this novel the system has a very very ugly and annoying ego, at certain points you just want the "system" to go and die. ontop of that is the failure penalty for missions (spoiler: donate 100k $, or what ever currency it uses, or be registered as a *** offender, yes this came out of no where. Do this **** in a week or loose your hair, so on and so one), this just shows poor humor at best and laziness on part of the author, instead of coming up with original story to light fire under the MC or at the very least think of a proper failure penalty (reward: +2 strength, failure: -2 charisma, etc). MC: To be fair I am at chapter 23 but MC is a spinless yes man. Past 3 chapters we already encountered several situation he was forced to do something he didnt want or feel comfortable with only because the person pushing him has tits (aka his mistress or so it seems). To be honest, most of the time his goal if wanting to be a Star, what ever that means doesn't really seem like something he wants, at least not with that personality: he is shy, does not like crowds, private and so on. World: 2/5 duh, its earth so nothing much is original yet. I will keep reading any may even update this novel but up to here its nothing much. The author would do better to concentrate on his newer novel marvel father something. The worst thing about a novel is when the MC is average at best and you feel he does not deserve what he has.

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