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KnightShade420
KnightShade420Lv146yr
2019-04-18 13:07

I will be honest that this story pisses me off. I love the scenario of a guy going in a parallel world where the entertainment industry is behind and using the original worlds entertainment to become incredibly famous and rich. But I hate the system. Usually I am a big fan of stories with a system but I hate systems that are a douche. I loved his magicians act but then the system ruined it by basically stealing his money. Donating to the hospital that cared for him could have been a touching scene but all I felt was pissed off by the system. Then the same thing when he wrote the book. What's the point of him writing books if he is not gonna make any money off of them. I kind of wanted to give it a 2/5 because the story makes me want to punch someone but I can't. Everything else is so good that the least I could give was a 4.4/5. I am currently on ch30 and can't force myself to read on. I think I will leave it on my library and if I get desperate I will come back to read it.

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