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BrownOptometrist
BrownOptometristLv116yr
2019-04-15 13:46

A story so good and unbelievable, which just makes it that much harder to believe that this is the authors first story. (Definitely Recommended to anyone looking for a good story to read and anyone who likes stories such as Choices, I am Hunter, Start by Becoming a Mangaka, IRAS ect.) It's a great magical realism story, that tells the story of Theodore Hunt(from our Earth) later known as Theodore Smith(a parallel universe that isn't a developed in their entertainment industry as ours), as he evolves from a tiny and skinny "misfit" (for a better lack of word) to an amazing and extraordinary person that's capable of a lot of things(Singing,Sewing,Animations,ect.), which makes him af perfect versatile star. And at the same time it's also a really sweet and heartfelt story that just brings a smile to your face. It's also hinted at, that there will be a "harem"(which involves fully developed characters and romance thats has been filled and obtained over time, and not just instantaneous love and dedication) in the future, where two of the "members" already have a sweet, adorable and kind daughter each. ...But enough ranting, Just start reading this amazing work and my hats of for the author

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