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Drawing cards at Hogwarts

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"One more time! This time I must get the animagus spell from Professor McGonagall!" Draw! Cash draw! Who is it? "I am the great astrologer, Trelawney!" [Divination +1] Tears welled up in Tom's eyes. Confronted with the magnificent magical world, Tom felt deeply that Muggle power has a limit, so he decided to shout that phrase: I will not be a Muggle! *I do not own the copyright of such fanfic or the contents of the novel or the Harry Potter book. If you want to support me, this is my Patreon, where you can find advance chapters: https://www.patreon.com/inferno303

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lord_couchpotato
lord_couchpotatoLv3

Ok let me be honest here, I have read lots of fanfics here on web novel from good to bad to just outright wish fulfilment fanfics with no regards to story. But this is another level. Honestly if you have anything else to read in our library read that instead of this. But in case you have nothing else to read and you are hardco*re HP fan below are the pros and cons of this novel. Pros: 1. No harem (Or con depending on reader) 2. Mc not op at start 3. No system penalty 4. Does makes you laugh at moments. Cons: 1. Story makes no sense what-so-ever, System reward is said to be something in one chapter but changed in next. Like literally multiple times. 2. Mc can not even reach 2nd year spell proficiency by himself without doing system advancement quest. Like seriously even if he learns everything he still can not use it. It makes the system more of a drag. I mean systems are suppose to help mc not restrict them even from learning most basic knowledge by themselves. 3. Mc just being a child deals with criminals, arm dealers etc. and no one questions it. 4. People like hermione just conveniently ignores the topics were mc's secrets are involved. 5. Racism and nationalism is obviously there with all the general racist and nationalist comments you can think of. 6. Talent points in system is just useless as author explains everything in term of skill points and giving analogy like 10 talent is 10 exp per hr. and 5 talent is 5 exp. That is not how talent works it's not 2+2=4 logic. 7. Even if mc gains training memory of a character the skills he receive is still 0/100 points at most basic level. How is that even possible it's like me getting a biologist's memory but still need to start from high school biology. 8. Wizards are shown very weak in this novel to the point that mc with a gun breaks quirrell's protego spell. Wizards here are shown more as an assa*sin where they can only win if they trick their opponent or stay hidden once they come face to face with muggles it's the end.

Rizki_Caturianto
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It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and good english/translation (there's a little wrong word, but I still understand what it means).. I like how MC/Tom don't afraid to change the plot.. He also change Hermione to Ravenclaw (I think she's more suit there than in Gryffindor), that mean the Golden Trio is changed too by Neville join Harry and Ron (I think it will be hard for them without Hermione, she's their brains.. Hope nothing bad happen to them).. I like his transformation/boggart ring.. It awesome to copy magical animals he's copy (Three-Headed Dog, Phoenix, Basilisk, Unicorn) and how he got a nerf/minor version of their powers (like he don't have healing tear of phoenix, or it power to teleport with fire) he needs the upgrade from his system to get the stronger power (like Reborn from ash/Nirvana).. I think that four is the most important transformation he must keep and don't change, because it will be more hard to meet and copy them again if delete/lose they copy slot.. I hate by how he become Lockhart in his 2nd years (although he's a great teacher), it's a dumb move for me 😁😂.. Although it has a plus (he's got Lockhart money).. I don't know what worse end for Lockhart, lose many his memory (like the film and book) or go to Azkaban (like this story) 😂🤣🤣 I like his assistant teaching tool/"Sister's".. It's awesome puppet 👍👍 I like the side adventures too 😁👍 I can say this is one of the best and one of my favorites Harry Potter fanfiction.. Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

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