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TiffanytrawersLv11yr
2023-10-19 08:25

This IS a Chinese novel being translated so I can't really point fingers but here are some of my doubts: 1) How come everything any nation other than China cooks is garbage? 2) What's with London being fused with Chinese geography 3) How come there are casinos in London that serve a buffet and allow children in? There are laws against that you know. 4) What's with the author's obsession with Hermione? They turned her into a brainless damsel in distress instead of the braniac she was in the canon.

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Braian_RodriguezLv1

Estoy completamente de acuerdo con lo de Hermione, no solo es una chica sin cerebro, no olvidemos que en realidad solo tiene 11, pero en realidad ya está pensando en cosas como matrimonio, no sería raro en nobles, pero ella era muggle antes llegar a la escuela, también, era bastante "fea" y "con grandes y prominentes dientes frontales" en sus primeros años, ella apenas se volvió una waifu en el quinto año, pero mc parece ver un ángel sagrado y puro cada vez que la ve... No recuerdo la edad del mc antes de reencarnar, pero sin duda no era un niño, es bastante raro que mc persiga a una niña de 11 años, personalmente le daría un disparo, luego está las limitaciones a los magos, mc es súper fuerte a veces, y súper débil en otras, mc realiza un hechizo capaz de destruir una ciudad pequeña en cierto punto, pero luego parece haber recibido un nerf masivo, prácticamente arriesgando su vida solo para conseguir un par de hechizo, útiles sin duda, pero sin comparación con lo que ya tenía... En fin, es una historia hecha sobre la marcha sin planificación, pero está bien para perder el tiempo, no es tan mala historia si ignoras esos detalles.

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lord_couchpotatoLv3

Ok let me be honest here, I have read lots of fanfics here on web novel from good to bad to just outright wish fulfilment fanfics with no regards to story. But this is another level. Honestly if you have anything else to read in our library read that instead of this. But in case you have nothing else to read and you are hardco*re HP fan below are the pros and cons of this novel. Pros: 1. No harem (Or con depending on reader) 2. Mc not op at start 3. No system penalty 4. Does makes you laugh at moments. Cons: 1. Story makes no sense what-so-ever, System reward is said to be something in one chapter but changed in next. Like literally multiple times. 2. Mc can not even reach 2nd year spell proficiency by himself without doing system advancement quest. Like seriously even if he learns everything he still can not use it. It makes the system more of a drag. I mean systems are suppose to help mc not restrict them even from learning most basic knowledge by themselves. 3. Mc just being a child deals with criminals, arm dealers etc. and no one questions it. 4. People like hermione just conveniently ignores the topics were mc's secrets are involved. 5. Racism and nationalism is obviously there with all the general racist and nationalist comments you can think of. 6. Talent points in system is just useless as author explains everything in term of skill points and giving analogy like 10 talent is 10 exp per hr. and 5 talent is 5 exp. That is not how talent works it's not 2+2=4 logic. 7. Even if mc gains training memory of a character the skills he receive is still 0/100 points at most basic level. How is that even possible it's like me getting a biologist's memory but still need to start from high school biology. 8. Wizards are shown very weak in this novel to the point that mc with a gun breaks quirrell's protego spell. Wizards here are shown more as an assa*sin where they can only win if they trick their opponent or stay hidden once they come face to face with muggles it's the end.

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