English is not my language, I use this site to help me learn. Despite my poor command of the language I will try to write a review. I read 5 chapters before quitting. The characters do not act with logic. I don't know if there are many casinos in London, but for an 11 year old to walk in so easily is impossible. I even think that the author never went there. Even McGonagall's reaction is unnatural. There are plenty of other details that make me stop and I don't want to list them all here.
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Took me a while to realize this is Chinese fan fiction. This guy is just translating it, and editing it. That's why a lot of things didn't make sense. he had the MC fish in a pond and caught "Yellow Surgeonfish" a quick google search would tell you these fish are saltwater tropical fish fishes. which makes no sense considering the MC is somewhere in Britain.
cn know no shit about other they only know that they numba on ..... their thing are godly .other are trash ... they the best..... all ff they wrote will change og character name to their prefer and even one piece will be cultivation ....... the world born from them ... they r god......... ... xiaopeng targaryan ... zhenfeng uchiha ... no shame atall .... so disgusting 🤮🤮😅😅🤡
