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I am a new writer Mc is a reincarnator who reincarnated in lookism world but gets invited to group chat please give me pointers on how to improve my writing. Mc goes from weaker to stronger worlds English is my third language

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Chapter 2

Looking back at the functions of chat group he started to explore the functions of the chat group. looking at the inventory he decided to check its capacity he first tried to put a bag in but failed but instead he saw a notification.

[Things provided by system or bought from system store can only be stored]

Sighing Kai started exercising while he looked at the store that could help him with faster result, eventually he found a perfect item but just imagining it was super painful. He bought the body tempering pill for 40 points.

[body tempering pill: To use the user needs to first swallow it then do hardcore exercise or some thing that exerts the body it lasts for 10 hours.]

Keeping the pill in his pocket booked a cab to take him to the nearest mountain and upon reaching he saw an empty space surrounded by trees. After swallowing the pill he felt his body burning up then he used all the possible moves of martial arts All he could feel was nothing but pain after doing each of the moves one time he was both physically and mentally exhausted but he kept on going after all he didn't want to waste any more time so he kept on going despite the pain on his body reached peak and he was bleeding from his hands, legs, thigh. Soon 10 hrs passed as he heard a notification.

[Effect of the tempering pill has finished]

[Recovery increasing]

Although he recovered all the blood loss he still wasn't able to move just as he fell from mental and physical exhausted using one of the broken tree as a support he lied down.

Just then he heard ruffling sound turning his head he saw a man with black eye and white iris. Looking at around he was shocked by seeing the surrounding trees broken large stones which had deep fists mark and trees which looked like it was broken coming near Kai the man with black eye and white iris asked "is this your doing and what is your name?"

"I did it, my name is kai help me get a cab" he said while gasping for air.

"Alright then but you owe me one you can call me gun" said the man with the man with black eye and white iris.

Reaching home and drinking water Kai stripped off his clothes and directly slept.

waking up Kai looked around and saw many messages from group chat he looked at the time and it was already 12 looking at the time left for the quest start he was there was 2 hours left he quickly left to bathe as he was stinky due to soil and sweat.

After a refreshing bathe he opened his drawer and took out a compressed turtle neck shirt mens leggings and sweatshirt in top and wearing a black shoe he headed out he was really hungry so he went to the convenient store and got himself some food as and and a drink sitting in a bench and eating he noticed a lot of people was looking at him, confused he opened the front camera on his phone and looking at him self he found his face improved than before.

'looks like the tempering pill works for other areas too' Kai thought as he passed his time wondering around and looking at his chat group.

[Mitsuri: Looks like the sword also have to be bought by others]

[Admin/marine: Don't worry about that you can gift us when we reach the quest world when one of us starts streaming.]

[mitsuri: alright]

[Please prepare your self world travel will start in 10 seconds]

Kai ran towards a alleyway and got teleported.

In a building a top of a school 3 people mysteriously appeared.

"Let me start the stream" marine instantly went on live and mitsuri donated the two nichirin sword as 02 already had gotten his sword from the group chat.

"lets stay here until it starts" Marine said getting nervous.

Kai noticing Mitsuri and 02 getting nervous said "don't worry zombies are just stupid as long as you don't produce any sound it will be alright."

Seeing both of them nod kai held his katana and just rested but as a minute passed by nothing happened until we headed to the washroom. Because it was class none of the students were in the hall way.

"kai-san how about we go to the building in front of us instead of staying here?" Marine asked

"Its a good plan the number of the zombies will also be less there lets head there" putting their katana in their inventory they all with their physical ability they reached the front building fast.

02 being a human-klaxo sapien she has high strength and amazing senses, Marine have the daniel's perfect body has the ability to copy perfectly and even further improve it.

After an half an hour the outbreak finally started waiting for an hour waiting for it to be settled they unsheathed their sword and were ready except for Kai he had confident his physical force is enough to crush skull after the painful training.

They quietly jumped over the gate and headed to the faculty room and while they were climbing they heard a scream and a sound of drill nodding to each other 02, marine and Kai started to run towards the location upon reaching there Saeko was consoling Saya.

"I hope we are not disturbing you guys" 02 said while opening a new lollipop and eating it.

" I am kitigawa Marine, she is 02 and he is kai strongest of our group" Marine said puffing her chest.

"Hello not trying to interrupt or anything but the sound attracted a lot of zombie and they seem to have their hearing enhanced so slightest sound can be heard so we should probably move."

Soon a grunting zombie entered the room who was blown away by Kai's punching.

Crack

"That's definitely a crack I heard did kai-san actually break its skull" Khota said in disbelief

"Of course that is easy for him" both kitaigawa proudly exclaimed

Reaching the staff room everyone cleaned themselves getting rid of blood.

[Note from author: Sorry for not telling you but my final exams are from tomorrow and it lasts for around 12 days so I will start posting from 'may 8' as it will be my last exam which ends at morning 11 in nepal]