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I am a new writer Mc is a reincarnator who reincarnated in lookism world but gets invited to group chat please give me pointers on how to improve my writing. Mc goes from weaker to stronger worlds English is my third language

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Waking up after a good night's sleep Akira woke up from his good sleep early in the morning.

It's been 1 month since kai reincarnated in this world ever since he knew he had reincarnated in lookism manhwa he started training because he didn't want to accidentally get wopped by some random character. He still gets chills when he remembered the stalker arc.

Looking at the timer floating and following ever since he was reincarnated coming to an end

00:00:05

00:00:04

00:00:03

00:00:02

00:00:01

00:00:00

[dimensional group chat activated]

[Kai joined the group chat]

[02 joined the group chat]

[Mitsuri joined the chat]

[Admin/marine: woah it's actually people from different world.]

[02: what do you mean by that are you.....]

[Admin/marine: wait for a second you will tots (totally) be shocked.]

[Admin/marine send lookism to kai]

[Admin/marine send demon slayer to Mitsuri]

 

kai was interested to know his story, what if the system hadn't appeared he looked breezing through the chapters until he saw him self appear and looks like he had helped little Daniel a lot teaching some techniques as he was also the person who taught Danial.

 

[marine: oh, by the way guys you should check out the daily log in function and newbie gift pack]

 

Checking the daily login function he pressed at the log in button.

[kai got 99 pts from daily log in]

[Marine: as expected kai-san is very lucky like in manhwa the number of coins you can get is actually from 0 to 100]

[02 got 50 pts from daily log in]

[Mitsuri got 60 pts from daily log in]

 

[Mitsuri: Ano~ its not much but please accept it its very useful information]

[User Mitsuri uploaded total concentration breathing]

[Members have can buy for 50 pts to learn]

[Mitsuri: ehhh! why?]

[Marine: don't worry its not like we can take it for free since it belongs to your organization] 

Kai decided to open his gift pack 

[kai obtained 5 - 100 years' experience card, can't be used or given to others- source system]

[marine got perfect body fusion- source lookism danial]

[02 got nichirin katana]

[Mitsuri got curse resistance]

 

[Marine: congratulation now you can live past 20 years Mitsuri]

[Mitsuri: ah! Thank you]

 

[quest]

[need to grow]

[missions: kill zombies 0/??]

[participant: 02, kai, Marine]

[time until the quest start: 24 hours]

 

[Marine: you should get your 2 martial arts books from ****** location also don't try to share the chat probably classifies it as cannot be traded]

[Kai: why though?]

[Marine: Actually in manhwa it said the line "Martial arts unique to Kai that cannot be copied"]

[Marine: Also Mitsuri can you get us some katana normal ones are fine]

[Mitsuri: give me some time]

[Marine: ok]

Closing the chat group, kai went to the location getting a cab he rushed to the abandoned library with books scattered around and in a worn down table there was two books and a letter reading the title of the book he instantly recognized as a smile bloomed on his face.

Renewal taekwondo

Full contact karate

Opening the letter he saw-

[hey boy you probably forgot about me as I erased your memory of us meeting, did you like the bonus at first all you chose was to reincarnate in lookism with 2 techniques and you were supposed to stumble in here 'accidentally' but my friends and I chose to do some thing else which was to invite you to chat group now have fun.]

 

Reading the letter, kai couldn't help but smile.

Grabbing the 100 years' experience card he decided to use on learning martial arts but it failed. Upon inspecting the problem he found he needed a source of thing, he needed something like a book or complete source of knowledge to actually use those card. So using the one 100 years' experience card learning full contact karate, he began to feel every thing, each moves as if he was actually practicing it. It lasted for half an hour until it stopped, he headed home and went near the punching bag taking a deep breath he got in a stance.

[Full contact karate]

[dance of the four gods]

[1st Stance: Basaltic Fist]

As his fist tore through the air and landed on the sand bag making his hand sink. He felt something rising and it was not the shield hero it pain his whole arm went numb as he couldn't feel his right arm regretting on testing the martial arts without proper body was a foolish thought.

He looked at the sand bag which had a hole where he punched and the sand was pouring out. He sighed as he had another problem to fix.

'why the hell did I do that' regretting he walked towards the sand bag as the pain was starting to die down using the broom he cleaned the sand falling out. He was able to move his right arm due to his pain tolerance that was build up due to the practice of martial arts using the card.

Taking the second card he used it on renewal Taekwondo as each moves was playing on his mind

Laying on the ground he used the third card on total concentration breathing after the card was used he sub-consciously used total concentration breathing the only reason he knew he was using the total concentration breathing was due to slight sting on his chest because the experience card gives memory and experience but the body will not change its like you knew techniques from your past life. Because practicing all three-high level of arts he now had a sixth sense that senses danger. 

[Note from author: Sorry for not telling you but my final exams are from tomorrow and it lasts for around 12 days so I will start posting from 'may 8' as it will be my last exam which ends at morning 11 in nepal]

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