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A Bend in Time

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Before there ever was a boy that ever lived in a cupboard on Four Privet Drive, there was a similar boy in a far worse home that lived on Spinner’s End. We all know the tale of that abused boy who grew up to become a bitter spy. But not all tales end the same for in the many parallel worlds that exist in the universe there are far better endings, and equally as many worse ones. This is a tale of one such condemned universe that for better or for worse chooses to change its own fate at through the sacrifice of the bitter spy. (All rights to the Harry Potter world and characters belong solely to J. K. Rowling. However, I do claim creative fanfiction rights. Please do not post my fanfiction elsewhere without my express permission. This work will also be partially hosted at RoyalRoad, Wattpadd, and Archive.)

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Chapter 1Prologue – In Time

Awaking and rather painfully, Rowan let out a pained groan holding her head with one hand and still blinked at her surroundings. Trying to regain her bearings, she gazed wildly about until her eyes came to rest upon a previously missed figure only standing mere feet away from her. A rather thin man with shallow skin, a large, hooked nose, and piercing black eyes. His dark silk robes hang limply on his body; however, they are stained with what appears to be encrusted, dried blood. Most concerning of all, he appears to have been observing intently for some time.

Rowan's hand automatically reaches for her weapon kept her side. Yet her hand comes up empty sending a cold shiver of dread down her spine. She tries to recall just how she got her when an agonizing pain threatened to split her head open. Gasping in white-hot pain, she clutches her head until the terrible ache dulls to a mere throb. The pain is so awful that she feels nausea swirling sickly as it climbs up her stomach towards the back of her throat.

Deciding not to press her luck, Rowan slowly raises her gaze to meet that of the stranger. A strange sense of unknown familiarity causes her to frown. She knew for a fact she had never met the man before; he was far too memorable to be easily forgotten. Yet before she can ponder further, the unknown man collapses onto the floor. A strong metallic scent wafts through the air.

Rowan sniffs the air and immediately recognizes the scent. She hurries over to the supposed dried, blood-encrusted robes. She none too gently presses her hand against the man and hears the man release a groan of pain. A gush of sticky wetness clings to her hand suggesting a gaping wound.

Despite the abrupt circumstances of their meeting, Rowan reaches for the medical kit only to grasp the air and find nothing. She withdraws her hand and applies pressure on the wound to still the flow of blood as much as possible. Without proper treatment, the stranger before her would bleed out before her very eyes.

Raising her gaze, Rowan carefully begins to study her surroundings. It was a plain white room that lacked any visible entrance or exit. Her eyes carefully searched for any signs of crevices or cameras. She could not find any, but that did not mean they were not there. Far more pressing to learn is where are they and why?

The thin stranger seems to slowly come back to and shoves her hand away. He grunts in pain and stiffly sits up despite the gaping wound on his side. "You should rest," Rowan said. "You need to keep pressure on your wound."

The stranger's nostrils flare and his lips curl in a dismissive sneer. "It is nothing," he coldly said causing Rowan's face to twitch in annoyance.

Turning his head to the side, the stranger's long black hair falls over his face. "It will make no difference," he muttered in a velvety English accented voice.

The room falls into silence for a moment, before the stranger raises his face again. "We are upon the fringes of time."

Rowan eyes the stranger with a healthy sense of skepticism. In the unlikely circumstance that the explanation was true that still did not explain what they were doing there nor much less the stranger's wounds. The reasonable conclusion was that the present situation was a product of her imagination or an illusion. Her gaze falls back to her hand covered in drying blood. Even the best illusions could not recreate blood, it was their strongest weakness. Alternatively, she could be experiencing a severe hallucinatory psychosis or coma.

"Thine concern is not necessary. The wound is fatal. And regrettably, there is nothing more that can be done at this juncture," the stranger drily interjected.

Deciding not to discount any possibility, but still unconvinced, Rowan says, "Presuming we are on the fringes of time. This would not be a time-traveling paradox would it now?"

Just in the case that it was, there were several rules for survival that must never be broken. Rule one, never trust an AI. Rule number two, never fully trust the timeline for the past and future can always be re-altered. Rule number three, every single action has a ripple effect. And Rule number four, nothing is ever as it seems.

"A time-traveling paradox?" The man's brow crinkled in confusion and annoyance at the term.

Furrowing her brow and much more suspicious, Rowan slowly leaned back. Theoretically, if the stranger before her was a product of hallucinatory psychosis or coma, her brain should still supply sufficient knowledge to create a realistic character for her mind to interact with. That did not mean she believed the stranger's unbelievable statement, but rather she was excluding the possibility of a mental breakdown or coma.

However, was something eerily familiar about the man that Rowan couldn't quite put her finger on. It was as though she is looking at a long last relative, but her father had been an only child. And as far as she was aware she was also an only child. Yet there was something, especially captivating about his ink-colored eyes that seemed to absorb all-natural light.

A loud cough startles Rowan out of her thoughts as the man coughs out a wad of blood. Reaching into his pocket for a blood-stained handkerchief, the cold-faced man irritably wiped his mouth clean. "Am I presently before the descendant born from the lustful union of a tree dryad and a druid?"

Rowan sighs with resignation at the family's skeleton in the closet so to speak. For once upon a time, a nature-loving druid fell in love with a tree dryad, and from their mutual love a child was born, her many great-grandfathers. The love story was true by all accounts as all their family members carried a spark of magic within them some more than others.

"You have the honor," Rowan flatly replied, before her face grows still as the last piece to the puzzle clicked into place. However, she could not deny the manner in which he pursed his lips and frowned identically to that her own. He was far older than her, he couldn't possibly in her twin! Her mind returned to his previous statement taking into account Occam's razor that states that the simplest explanation is always right.

Perturbed but unable to deny the principle of Occam's Razor, Rowan stiffly asks, "I apologize for any rudeness my question might incur but are you my future self? Because please do not misunderstand me, but I very much prefer being a woman and have no interest in being otherwise."

"Preposterous," the stranger scoffed looking rather appalled at the idea itself. Holding himself up with dignity, he solemnly says, "I am from an alternative plane if you will."

Rowan privately sighed in relief as she could not imagine herself as a man. However, that did little to put her at ease. Narrowing her eyes, she coolly asks, "In that case, what is the reason for bringing you here? Interplane travel is forbidden by the very laws of existence and magic. The breaking of these laws requires an impossible price that death would be preferable than the price paid."

Partially ignoring the question, the thin man breathlessly rasped, "I require your assistance," before violently shaking with back-breaking coughs.

Concerned by the statement, Rowan rolls up her sleeves to reveal a leaf-like birthmark on her upper wrist. The grizzled man's lips twitch into a bloody smile. "So, you're a Magician?" The grizzled man bitterly coughed revealing blood-stained crooked teeth.

Rowan blinks in surprise and frowns at the bitter reply. "You are not one, I take?"

The grizzled man adamantly shakes his head in thinly veiled horror. "What an utterly ludicrous suggestion, Madam. I can assure you that I am a wizard!" He proudly declared.

Rowan frowns in dislike and stared down her nose at him. "A mere wizard, yes?" The grown man sneers back at her with a familiar twist of lips causing Rowan to sneer back in an identical fashion.

Turning away, Rowan folds her arms over her chest in solemn contemplation. If Magicians did not exist in an alternative plane, then why was the wizard before here? Magicians in some respects are undoubtedly weaker than wizards. Wizards may perform all sorts of magic with a wand. On the other hand, Magicians are born only being able to use one type of magic. And even then, very few Magicians were ever able to match a wizard in power, and those rare enough to do so are classified as Grand Magicians.

"I am not a Grand Magician," Rowan warily said. "I cannot fulfill your request for power if that is what you seek."

"Were it as simple as that," the thin man coughed streams of blood into his handkerchief. "No, I need you to fulfill a far greater task. I require you to change fate itself."

"It is impossible," Rowan flatly stated. "The flow of time cannot be changed, and fate cannot be stopped. And even hopefully contemplating this madness, my very existence will be rejected by your plane. My very existence is a virus that your plane will seek to eradicate."

"That is exactly, why it will work," the thin man snapped back refusing to be dismayed. "Any changes that are made by your persona will be permanent as your existence is not from my plane nor the original timeline."

"Presuming this highly improbable theory is correct," Rowan asked, "just what exactly am I supposed to prevent?"

The thin man triumphantly stares down his crooked, hooked nose at her. "There is an evil wizard that must be stopped. We lost all hope the boy died, we just didn't know it then," his voice trailed off into a whisper, before regaining strength. "Lord Voldemort must perish before he ever succeeds."

"Wait, are you talking about H**** P*****?" Rowan incredulously said and frowned. She tried to speak again, but nothing came out of her voice.

"Excuse me?" The thin man sputtered vaguely insulted.

"I'm assuming your name is Severus Snape, am I correct?" Rowan deadpanned.

The thin man narrows his eyes and icily responds, "Given that you are my alternate version, I should think that should be a surprise to you." He waited for more, but nothing more came. "I forewarn you, prepare yourself."

"Hold just a second!" Rowan protested reaching over to grab him by the collar. "I never agreed to this!"

Severus Snape blatantly ignored Rowan's protests, "The year will be 1971."

Before Rowan can shake some sense into Severus Snape, a loud audible crack is heard. Cracks spread throughout the room as if ice breaking into pieces. A defeating roar is heard from outside as if they are moving through a vacuum of space. "What have you done, Severus!" She shouted into his face not releasing her grip on his robes.

"We've run out of time," Severus Snape croaked, before staring grimly at her. "You were already dying when I found you. I changed your fate, now change mine."

Rowan releases Severus in shock as she touches her chest and remembers the agonizing feeling of being stabbed through the chest. She glances down only to see a giant hole in her chest that was not bleeding. She should be dead from her wound, but she wasn't.

The white room rapidly breaks apart like an eggshell as the grizzled man yells over the roar, "Save-!"

"Wait-!" Rowan called out too late as the white room broke apart and they fell into utter darkness.

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I should start with saying that this story is very difficult to review. For the first 450ish chapters, it's 5-star worthy and amazing, easily being one of the best HP ff I've ever read. Which makes it all the more disappointing that by chapter 600 it's just degraded to the point of well-written garbage. It's a shame to see such a great author become worse at writing over time rather than better. It's getting by on 3.8 stars only because it's a dead corpse riding on the back of a fantastic foundation. I'll try to avoid spoilers and just give general comments and gripes with character designs rather than mentioning anything specific. For the first 450 chapters of the series It's probably one of the best harry potter FF I've ever read, the characters are well-researched, the backgrounds make sense, the interactions feel real with individual personalities and actions along with dashes of mystery and some drama. If that's all that was currently out I'd have given the story 5 stars in basically everything. Around chapter 450 though the author seemed to have hit a rut.. they just copied the original main plot (the subplots still fine though for a bit) making characters inconsistent or utterly betraying all their characteristics until that point in order to force certain extremely stupid events to occur just to make an already lazy plot work. Which is fine, just mediocre, I'd be mildly annoyed but still like the series if that was all. But then it just keeps getting worse and worse... by chapter 600 there are poorly thrown-together plot threads that feel rushed and serve little purpose besides overcomplicating things and shock value. The characters themselves become flat, losing all the personality that made them unique in the beginning, Heck, I'm pretty sure if the characters in the story just talked with each other instead of refusing to tell each other anything like a group of grade schoolers gossiping about a secret the story would have been finished by now. The same character has made the same epiphany 3 times within 100 chapters and had the same freaked-out reaction each time, acting as if they figured it all out for the first time all over again. I'm half expecting them to have the same revelation again at some point. The actual plot also just stops making any amount of sense, new powers and mcguffins keep popping up for no real reason, the mc will have a problem and spontaneously decide to start reading a random book on a shelf and suddenly find the answer to their problem (but refuse to tell or ask anyone for help despite having access to 3 world-class wizards 2 of which she trusts with her life). The author also seems to have a really weird male superiority complex. Now, this is odd because the mc is female and the author at least claims to be female. I don't mean male political power or anything about males thinking they are higher than females. Those can get a pass because of purebloods and such, it makes sense for the setting. What doesn't make sense is seemingly magic itself is so much stronger for males than females that any female might as well just snap their wand if they want to compete in their version of HP. Despite the mc getting McGuffin after McGuffin and power up after power up even at the expense of her own health and has gone on the record to be told she is containing so much power it's starting to affect her because of the cost of such strength for her body. She is then repeatedly told that she is weaker, dumber and just worse than another character in nearly every way and is then trounced by them when they've done literally nothing besides be a guy going to school with 0 McGuffins, powerups or sacrifices. Heck, some of her power-ups are even turned into weaknesses and she's told 'all power comes at a price but he gets it for free because he's a male'. It's so bizarre to see just how pathetic they make the mc just to make the other character seem better despite them doing basically nothing for 600 chapters. The mc went from this fantastic feisty little ball of paranoid witch into... well a bit of a mess that's still magically weaker than a completely normal 7th year male for some reason despite getting so many McGuffins and power-ups which means her normal strength must have been truly pathetic. There's a female that's at one point almost r*ped and she just acts like its another day after, they don't report it or anything she even acts like it wasn't that big of a deal being more annoyed that her friends were trying to look out for her than the boys attempting it. She's not even shell-shocked or anything she just acts like an NPC with no personality reading off scripted lines even making jokes and calling someone that helped her rude for not offering to walk them back yet making no comment about the boys. I just don't understand why the author turned such a fantastic story into this.

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I'm sorry to say that I'd be the 70th review. 69 hehe. Well, it had to happen. I couldn't just go on without reviewing this. This. Is. A. Hidden. Gem. It's as if... JK Rowling decided to write a fanfic of HP herself. It basically has all the magic of the original Harry Potter, but explored a bit more, and set back in time a little bit, so the author's free to develop her characters to her heart's content, since all the other characters aren't there. This is the crown jewel of all the Harry Potter fanfictions on here. The protagonist is an OC called Rowan. A twin of Severus Snape. I know, it felt cringey when I heard it at first too. Like, oh no. This is going to turn into another one of those trash fics, isn't it? No. No. No. Argh! I can't even begin to describe it without going into spoiler territory or being a general fanatic. Anyways. Writing Quality: There are a few misspelled words here and there (what stood out to me was her constant misspelling of prefects lmao perfect), some parts don't flow that well, but it's expected of a webnovel with 1k+ words per chapter that comes out everyday. And also, if you compare it to some of the popular novels on Webnovel, it's writing at perfection. It's writing style is like that of a published novel too. Stability of Updates: This author updates daily. And currently, she's uploading two chapters per day. Author, I love you. I actually love you. If you decide to eunuch this, I'm actually going to castrate you. Story Development: Ohhhhhh, I actually love you. This webnovel doesn't go 3 chapters without some huge plot twist happening. It always keep you on edge. It's as good as, or even better than the translated Korean novels out there, which is saying something. (Cough cough Second Coming of Gluttony, I love you, but sometimes you get dull asf) Character Design: Since the author has set the background of the story to the generation before Harry Potter- (basically, in the same timeframe as James Potter and the rest of the Marauders) those characters aren't fleshed out. So the author does the fleshing out by herself, which results in, of course, me actually caring about the characters. Not many authors are able to do that with their own OC, and basically, a ton of blank slate characters. World Background- Harry Potter. Need I say more? However, since this novel's setting isn't exactly the same as Harry Potter's, there are some other things that are delved into, that I can't say without spoiling. Go read the novel if you've already scrolled to this point. I guarantee you won't regret it. It's really fuqing good. And it almost has 300 chapters.

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