dadaoist

hatsu seem fine and pretty original. May be you need time to adapt. Otherwise choose a more general ability. Like space control. Where he would begin with very little mastery over his ability then progress through your story.

An update plzzzzz !!!!

It isn't really clear how they can find him everytime

+1

I agréé with the edit. I don t think it added anything interesting.

it get colder until it get hotter. I think the lower is 10 km After that it begin to get hotter.

Really good story. Original idea about cyberpunk. Plz go on !

Otto could find letters from his father. Letters at this time were kept a long time. The hightower must have spies within the maesters. Thé letters could come from them.

a northen lady, an oc, even a freefolk!

nice story. About the exchange of money between muggle and magical world, there must be product that are both valued by wizard and muggle alike. Lands, gold, food,... if he can exchange money he can sell products.