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Reborn: Super God of War

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Battle Emperor Fu Sheng is the most popular player in the game, The New Age. Everyone believes that only he will become the champion in the final battle! His real name—Lin Jie. The reason for his participation in the battle is to win the Capsule of Revitalization for his injured mother and sister. With the Broken Blade, a Heritage weapon, in hand, he finally makes it to the final battle! Only then does he realize that his best friend had betrayed him! After his devastating defeat, Lin Jie is shocked to realize that he had time-travelled all the way back to a few years ago when the beta version of The New Age was just about to launch! With all my knowledge of the game... Pros on the leaderboard? All of them my underlings! First kill of a BOSS? Mine! First clear of the exclusive dungeon? Still mine! Whatever I lost in the past, I’ll get them all back! Whoever brought me trouble, you’re as good as dead! When I have the chance to do it all over again, I WILL BE EMPEROR! I am Fu Sheng, the STRONGEST warrior in The New Age. No one, absolutely no one, can stand before me!

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Surprisingly bad... I thought The Almighty Ring would be the worst web novel I would read in 2019, but I was proven very wrong. I'm not sure how much of the problems with this story can be attributed to the translator and editor versus the author, but there are tons of problems. The writing is downright unreadable at times. It feels like entire paragraphs or even chapters worth of vital information missing. I only tolerated a few chapters before dropping this series, but I was already lost and confused by chapter 2. Details are inconsistent and contradictory. Where is the narrative? Did the MC even die? Why doesn't he seem remotely bothered or confused by the fact he went back in time? Is this a normal thing? That "betrayal" wasn't even slightly dramatic, leaving me wonder what the big deal was at the end of the first chapter. Everything appears to be action, which is fine for an action fan like me, but there's no description to go along with that action. It's just "Boom! Things happened" and "MC got this bonus." What little information is given about the MMORPG doesn't make a lick of sense.... Seriously, what is even going on? I'm not sure this can even be considered to have any story development. The story is technically there but, development? No. The pacing is very fast, but there's no narrative or anticipation. Even though a handful of side characters got introduced quickly, there character-establishing moments are weak, and the characters have no depth. The MC definitely has no depth. I'm shocked this even got approval for a translation.

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This is a piece of trash. 1. The MC reincarnates after losing a fight after being betrayed by his "friend", forget to explain how he really died "God killed him" "died of anger" nobody knows. Ohh I went back to the past, hello mom, little sister. What will we eat today?. sh1it! 2. Let's talk about your concern for his family, which at every opportunity clarifies that it is his greatest concern. Sh1it I read 70 chaps .. and the interaction they had will have been 1/2 chapter and it was irrelevant! sh1it!. 3. The game ... so many things to say ... let's begin, at no time is a time relationship between the real world and the world within the game clarified which can confuse them; the MC has knowledge of powerful items and only decides to get a few and several by chance. he only cared about the sealed sword, with trash statistics that falls when he dies and that in order not to be recognized he decides not to use it in important moments .. sh1it! If you are not going to use it for great things, leave it in a deposit in the city and look for something of less quality that has better attributes and you can use it. Their enemies, all obtain large amounts of equipment and skills of equal or superior quality to the MC and only God knows where. 4. Mc skills as a player or strategist are rubbish! Noob enemy elites without knowledge of the game put him in trouble or even almost killed him. his awareness of the environment is appalling, he was ambushed a large number of times and has never detected it before. Great skills from one of the 'best' players in the game. sh1it. 5. His greatest enemy ... who curiously is not the one who betrays him, but someone who came out of nowhere and according to the MC is the ruin of his family who suffered a car accident and who is believed until now to be a coincidence, sh1it! How does that make any sense! In the game they meet and the enemy says "ohh we ambushed you for that sword xx (your biggest secret that nobody should know yet) kill him". sh1it! There is a legendary wiki that this antagonist can access to know everything the stupid MC has and how the hell it works. sh1it! Anyway, don't waste your time on this garbage, which is a bad copy of other works full of holes in the plot.

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