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Oddballs
OddballsLv46yr
2019-03-06 01:35

Seriously how is this ranked so high? I mean I know my comment will be erased like all my previous comments on other novels but still. How is the MC even betrayed? The dude literally walked up and stabbed the guy in the chest like some cheater who paid off his opponent if anything I was happy that he was tricked as the guy is literally retarded and then he died? What?? What is this Sword Art online 2.0? The plot literally jumps from him dying to all of the sudden waking up in the past and he accepts it within seconds/minutes of waking up no problem. It then jumps to him solving all his family problems and ends up in game where it is suppose to be the first day of the game going live. Instead I don't know what the author was smoking but it feels like the game has been live for years as all of a sudden "elites" and guilds are popping out of nowhere with no real explanation on their backgrounds other than the characters being flat with no real character other than antagonizing the MC. Don't even get me started on the ridiculous 57000 exp required to level up to like 80% of level 2. I literally felt my balls hurt and want to smash my sexy laptop after reading this crap. 12 chapters in and I feel like this story is one of the worst pieces of crap I have ever seen. There are tons of stories better than this pile of crap ranked a lot lower and somehow this is near the top? Please if you are going to treat your readers as retards as least make it slightly believable Qidian.

Reborn: Super God of War

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4.0
601 Chs

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Ethanajn
EthanajnLv5

Everyone rates trash novels like these high. Nothing that can be done about it.

6yr
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PrincessPeachfanBR
PrincessPeachfanBRLv7

Qidian rate them high for people to see the new novel(another trash game reincarnation novel) because if not no one would even bother to try reading this

6yr
13
mohamad24xx
mohamad24xxLv5

Good novel for Webnovel But not it’s users

6yr
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mohamad24xx
mohamad24xxLv5

Good novel for Webnovel But not it’s users

6yr
3
mmadeshia
mmadeshiaLv5

☺️

6yr
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FreeTrial
FreeTrialLv6

Hope your ball is still okay, what happen to your sexy laptop?

6yr
33
EdwinTr
EdwinTrLv11

I'm wondering the same

FreeTrial:Hope your ball is still okay, what happen to your sexy laptop?
6yr
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Cawcaw
CawcawLv4

How many days did you smash your laptop for, and are your balls aching now?

6yr
17
Mmoogl
MmooglLv11

"Don't even get me started on the ridiculous 57000 exp required to level up to like 80% of level 2. I literally felt my balls hurt " might just be the best words ever written by a person on Webnovel. I am in awe, really. Much appreciated.

6yr
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Mmoogl
MmooglLv11

Because the majority of people are dumb 10 year olds that really have no idea how to appreciate a good story. They literally can't read between the lines, if you give them an actual character with any kind of personality, they'll ***** because they're too dumb to understand their thoughts/actions.

Ethanajn:Everyone rates trash novels like these high. Nothing that can be done about it.
6yr
9
_nekonekoneko
_nekonekonekoLv4

This bovel is the Legendary Descendant Destroyer eh

FreeTrial:Hope your ball is still okay, what happen to your sexy laptop?
6yr
4
ReadaholicN
ReadaholicNLv4

Those words felt like they were aimed at me...

Mmoogl:Because the majority of people are dumb 10 year olds that really have no idea how to appreciate a good story. They literally can't read between the lines, if you give them an actual character with any kind of personality, they'll ***** because they're too dumb to understand their thoughts/actions.
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33147Jim
33147JimLv15

Inspiring

6yr
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33147Jim
33147JimLv15

Ty

6yr
33147Jim
33147JimLv15

Exp

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33147Jim
33147JimLv15

Ty

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zealzaczue
zealzaczueLv10

Exp

6yr
Ziyun
ZiyunLv10

I just read the synopsis and I knew it was going to be trash lol

6yr
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Ziyun
ZiyunLv10

I just read the synopsis and I knew it was going to be trash lol

6yr
MiLfL0VeR
MiLfL0VeRLv12

Thats why i only read those originals that is stable in updsting and those novels that striked my interest zone like my house of horrors

6yr
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De he/she just say God Of War?! With a Super?! So basically you're telling me that its Super Kratos?! Kratos 2.0?! More overpowered Kratos?! My real question is: Is BOY included?!

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thestatsguy
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Website : qidian china Views : 2.77million Rating : 9.3(669) Chapters : 700 approx Status :completed Word count : 2.19million author level : lv4 No of works : 2 Disscussion : 561 Year started : 2014 Chinese title : 重生之超级战神 Guys my current favorite novel is "Beautiful Time With You". It's one of the best romance novels I ever read! I know many of you might be hesitating cuz it's Ye Fei Ye novel! I can understand that! But I promise you it's a very cute and prolly the funniest novel with like zero heart wrenching moments! Give it a try guys! MC is very different and also super surprising thing is ML isn't a complete jerk! Also guys check out my book "The Statsguy's Mag" on my profile if you're considering reading a book or not or for some recommendations!

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GoddessMiu
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Alsreal
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Reveal spoiler

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ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6

If you liked Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God for all of it's plot holes, plot armor, annoying side characters, chapters of filler, zero background information on important Characters, terrible world building, Dues ex Machinas out of nowhere, overly smug MC, nonsensical plotlines, Enemies for no reason and all that other Crap: Then look no further as this Novel is ripping it off with little to no effort along with every other VRMMO Story for the last 10 years! Enjoy!

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ResidentialPsycho
ResidentialPsychoLv15

Surprisingly bad... I thought The Almighty Ring would be the worst web novel I would read in 2019, but I was proven very wrong. I'm not sure how much of the problems with this story can be attributed to the translator and editor versus the author, but there are tons of problems. The writing is downright unreadable at times. It feels like entire paragraphs or even chapters worth of vital information missing. I only tolerated a few chapters before dropping this series, but I was already lost and confused by chapter 2. Details are inconsistent and contradictory. Where is the narrative? Did the MC even die? Why doesn't he seem remotely bothered or confused by the fact he went back in time? Is this a normal thing? That "betrayal" wasn't even slightly dramatic, leaving me wonder what the big deal was at the end of the first chapter. Everything appears to be action, which is fine for an action fan like me, but there's no description to go along with that action. It's just "Boom! Things happened" and "MC got this bonus." What little information is given about the MMORPG doesn't make a lick of sense.... Seriously, what is even going on? I'm not sure this can even be considered to have any story development. The story is technically there but, development? No. The pacing is very fast, but there's no narrative or anticipation. Even though a handful of side characters got introduced quickly, there character-establishing moments are weak, and the characters have no depth. The MC definitely has no depth. I'm shocked this even got approval for a translation.

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DaoistSloth
DaoistSlothLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Madaradagod
MadaradagodLv12

Very much similar to that one reborn thief novel. I had good hopes at beginning but it just seems like your average vrmorpg nothing to special. Maybe it will get better but most likely not. Good luck to those who stick with it let me know at a later time if it’s worth a read

6yr
SavageGamer
SavageGamerLv14

Completely generic story with which blatantly copies other novels.Unlikable mc who only knows how to solve problems with plot armor.He has no skills in the game even though he is supposed to have been one of the best before he got reincarnated.

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