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SaintBookwormLich
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2019-03-06 08:54

The worst part of this novel is not the lack of originality but the lack of any sense, how you expect someone let you stab even if they are sworn brothers? And why did you tell the other guy stabs you if you’re gonna change of heart and stab him back? This novel’s appalling... spare the time and chose some other novel if you enjoy the genre.

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