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Arphadax
ArphadaxLv65yr
2019-03-10 06:52

I have read until chapter 6 ... and I give up : boring generic and there is absolutly no transistion it's litterally : "I need that, pouf I'm in the good location, I kill the ennemy, I got what I wanted and even more ... now I need that pouf I'm already there and repeat again". It remind me the MMORPG where there is no global map, you just have to clic to start an instance with random players ... good for game like LoL, bad for MMORPG. Well I only went to chap 6, maybe I'll miss a intersting story but I don't think a good story can begin with so much defects.

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De he/she just say God Of War?! With a Super?! So basically you're telling me that its Super Kratos?! Kratos 2.0?! More overpowered Kratos?! My real question is: Is BOY included?!

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