Naruto: The curse of Hatred

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Good. No gamer op. Mc x Hanabi or Karin..................................................................................................................................................................

I hope he learns Shisui's shunshin and gets help from Shisui in both kenjutsu and genjutsu. After all Itachi got his help to become op. Also he should try not to act so depressing. Give him a hobby. Increase Int by playing shogi against his Nara sensei. He was not able to hide his progress so he should take all the advantages he can take. Both genjutsu and fuinjutsu can be broken if he tries hard enough. He is growing stronger in a good speed but he needs more friends away from Itachi. Thanks 👍

I really like that the MC, how do I speak? A human MC, the confusion, doubts, and changes of thought. We are this, the human change and mature with the time and this include the adaptation. The game body and mind is not overly excessive as other novels, that the MC turns plain and cold with immortal body, this is a good point for me, but a bad point for you. I think that the MC, it is important that you (Author) show the though process about the action and objectives of the MC, I don't know if there are another objectives beyond to survive the Uchiha Massacre... Well, the quests maybe to direct him, but is important that he has own objectives. Wow, thank you for the novel, I am enjoying every much! Keeping the good work!

Dude, I know I'm very picky with my comments. I tend to criticize everything bad. And honestly me only complaining about the chronology speaks volumes about the rest of your story. Don't take it personally, I like this story, but I'm a stickler for canon. Thanks for the chapters I'll still keep complaining, because I hate it when they write about a character without even knowing their age.

My only problem is that he is relying on the store way too much. he is debating whether he should buy shadow clone or hiraishin from the system stone. Don't tell me that the uchiha library doesn't have shadow clone jutsu. Pretty sure uchihas also had the hiraishin or at least a bootleg version of it in their library. So far mc is looking seemingly dumb

I honestly liked it, it shows how the life of an uchiha should be, it doesn't have a completely stupid system, a nice progression and originality in the characters I recommend reading a criticism would be the beginning, as it lacks fluidity in the writing and it bothered me a little, luckily that changed and now I'm looking forward to the next chapters

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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

love the story so far, and the choices made are as original as i hoped

Buena serie, recomendada. No aburrida y repetitiva . 5 estrellas mi gente ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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A quality uchiha based story, great storytelling, lovely bits of tension for the future, very clean grammar, overall a fantastic read and would highly recommend.

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