HabitualChaos
My purpose in writing is to have fun and explore ideas that interest me.
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HabitualChaos8 months agoเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วI can't imagine an "ordinary" level 98 Duoluo.
- HabitualChaos10 months agoตอบกลับถึง Sumeet_K
Canon
- HabitualChaosa year agoเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
John seems Tony boss right now
- HabitualChaosa year agoเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I feel that, like robots speaking. In the last conversation in this chapter, Tony Stark never could speak like a real estate seller, maybe if was his own house, but he could speak with jokes. If you want him to help the MC, you can include Tony asking for Jarvis to find a house based in the MC cementers. Perhaps you should search about the characters' voices, for writing a voice more similar to each character. Please, consider a positive comment. I wish the best and keep going!
- HabitualChaosa year agoตอบกลับถึง Zetsway
She would use Assembly (-:
- HabitualChaosa year agoตอบกลับถึง carrotpie
Maybe food and monitoring.
- HabitualChaosa year agoเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I had read "edgy" ashashash
- HabitualChaosa year agoเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Be careful with the pronouns, as Spencer is a man you need to use "his" and "he". Your work is so good, thanks for the chapter! :-)
- HabitualChaosa year agoตอบกลับถึง mythoscribe
Who is Lana Rhodes? It's an OC?
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - HabitualChaosa year agoตอบกลับถึง hezjz
Can I clean here?
