ravhage

love the story so far i hope you can continue it

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love the story so far, the MC is chill and logical. i hope and am eager to see more of this

good story, love the shadow approach. make a patreon and stick to the story please, all the good earning writers try to finish 1 in 2 stories at least to keep an audience.

too much content, too much description without story advancement, you risk making a good character an edge lord, and there you will loose the story and your audience

love the story so far, i hope you stick to it. will you reveal the year where the story take place or are you hoping to divorce the story from reality ?

please no pokephilia but other then that i agree : more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

thats a good phrase

you have a magnificent sense of humor, i know this site doesnt encourage good writing but please continue to grace us with your brand of insanity ^^

love the story so far