Dude, I know I'm very picky with my comments. I tend to criticize everything bad. And honestly me only complaining about the chronology speaks volumes about the rest of your story. Don't take it personally, I like this story, but I'm a stickler for canon. Thanks for the chapters I'll still keep complaining, because I hate it when they write about a character without even knowing their age.
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