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DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS.

Author: OVERLOAD69
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Read DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS. fanfiction written by the author OVERLOAD69 on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering romance, r18, system, harem, overpowered. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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As the man's last breath escaped him, he whispered, "This is the end..." A warrior who had lost everything, he lay on the battlefield, his body empty of life and energy. In his final moments, he thought back on all he had lost and experienced, and closed his eyes, believing it all to be over. But when he awoke, he found himself in an unfamiliar bed, in a peaceful, modern world. He was bewildered, and whispered to himself, "I didn't ask for this." He had no choice but to try and make a new life for himself in this unfamiliar place, thinking to himself, "I will live a peaceful life this time." However, he soon discovers that he has been given a second chance to reclaim everything he had lost. Will he be able to hold onto it this time, or will it all slip through his fingers once again? Find out by reading the novel. Current worlds: I got a cheat ability in another world and became extraordinary in the real world. My Dress-Up Darling Classroom Of The Elite More to be updated later... Note: The main character of this story will be emotionless from the start, so if you do not enjoy that type of character, it may not be the story for you. However, he is not completely emotionless. For those who want to join in, here is the Discord link: https://discord.gg/NdaZBAbQ8D To read ahead, check out my Patreon page: https://www.patreon.com/OVERLOAD69

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