Review Detail of Slan in DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS.
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Too cliché, the characters are so boring and not to mention the protagonist. Read it at your own risk, I do not recommend it...............................................
DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS.
OVERLOAD69
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yes because mc is very easy to accept and order, also sometimes your chapter flow is confusing, because there is no need to write from all different angles and times, more direct when writing or you can use your point of view, with marin and who mc girl is too nice And no excuses, but while with mc grafitya it's good to maintain dignity, it also eliminates cooking for women, not men. your hard work is cool.
OVERLOAD69:did you not like the story?
ok. I don't know how you reached the conclusion about MC being someone who listens to others, or why he is nice to Marin. he is passive towards Marin because the reason is there in the book.
Zzz_808:yes because mc is very easy to accept and order, also sometimes your chapter flow is confusing, because there is no need to write from all different angles and times, more direct when writing or you can use your point of view, with marin and who mc girl is too nice And no excuses, but while with mc grafitya it's good to maintain dignity, it also eliminates cooking for women, not men. your hard work is cool.
but still feed them, make costumes for free, why doesn't mc teach them to cook, what are women's functions for?
OVERLOAD69:ok. I don't know how you reached the conclusion about MC being someone who listens to others, or why he is nice to Marin. he is passive towards Marin because the reason is there in the book.
Zzz_808:but still feed them, make costumes for free, why doesn't mc teach them to cook, what are women's functions for?
Zzz_808:but still feed them, make costumes for free, why doesn't mc teach them to cook, what are women's functions for?
Zzz_808:but still feed them, make costumes for free, why doesn't mc teach them to cook, what are women's functions for?
LukeMorningStar:Wow, your life must be pretty depressing if you have that kind of thinking and lonely too.
OVERLOAD69:so you are supporting the fact the only use for women is to cook and clean?
you really have that 'Twitter' attitude. maybe you should find an fr where Mc cooking for women 24/7 like a slave. maybe that will help you
LukeMorningStar:Wow, your life must be pretty depressing if you have that kind of thinking and lonely too.
Don't worry, I found one and while it's fictional, the MC has probably gotten into more relationships than you have because I doubt anyone could love you with that kind of fragile mindset and even more fragile reasoning. xD
Hunter_69:you really have that 'Twitter' attitude. maybe you should find an fr where Mc cooking for women 24/7 like a slave. maybe that will help you
Don't be a resentful woman, the point is that MCs shouldn't do free jobs (cook, make dresses, make up, clean, take photos, edit... etc). Mc is a Simp, beta and cuckold man... why; Mc licks the boots of any woman. Working for free for any woman, for the simple fact that she is a woman and a "waifu" character, IS Pathetic!
OVERLOAD69:so you are supporting the fact the only use for women is to cook and clean?
and who is the person that the mc is working for free? if you are going to say marin then they just haven't talked about the payment because the order hasn't been made yet he only cooked for marin once just once because they were the guest on the house. I don't see him cooking after that Or doing any chores cause grayfia does it and he did make some sopu for grayfia but that was because she was I'll so it is alright.
Bob_Uchiha_XD:Don't be a resentful woman, the point is that MCs shouldn't do free jobs (cook, make dresses, make up, clean, take photos, edit... etc). Mc is a Simp, beta and cuckold man... why; Mc licks the boots of any woman. Working for free for any woman, for the simple fact that she is a woman and a "waifu" character, IS Pathetic!
Hunter_69:Is there any use for them in your ff? maybe séx? 😶 dude is emotionless after all
OVERLOAD69:and who is the person that the mc is working for free? if you are going to say marin then they just haven't talked about the payment because the order hasn't been made yet he only cooked for marin once just once because they were the guest on the house. I don't see him cooking after that Or doing any chores cause grayfia does it and he did make some sopu for grayfia but that was because she was I'll so it is alright.
Don't be angry, calm down. Although you should add tags to know what to expect from the story. Mc is a SIMP, Beta "man" and is very dumb; so if the author warned in the synopsis about Mc... it would prevent readers from reading something unpleasant (in her personal opinion).
OVERLOAD69:and who is the person that the mc is working for free? if you are going to say marin then they just haven't talked about the payment because the order hasn't been made yet he only cooked for marin once just once because they were the guest on the house. I don't see him cooking after that Or doing any chores cause grayfia does it and he did make some sopu for grayfia but that was because she was I'll so it is alright.