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crinix7 months agoCommentedwhy are you wasting almost all the chapter just explaining his abilities, they will be irrelevant in 1 to 2 chapter.
- crinixa year agoReplied to Zandora
Nope
- crinix2 years agoReplied to Daoist_Empereur
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- crinix2 years agoReplied to Poetic_Justice
This translation is not from the start of story.
- crinix2 years agoReplied to Daoist_Empereur
I Am Loaded With passive Skills
- crinix2 years agoReplied to Daoist_Empereur
Well you have to read the original for that.... because I'm not translating it from the start
- crinix3 years agoCommented
wasn't he was son of train conductor ?
- crinix3 years agoPosted
It's a great fanfic...but i think Author wasted a lot potential by rushing the plot.Side character are not really they just in background for one or two dialogue...like literally I don't remember the name of MC sister because she doesn't really have a role in fanfic aside from just being there...just like the Cursed hammer he got at early stages i also don't remember much about him because Author is rushing the writing.It has become boring and predictable...i think Author is going with the theme of MC doing all the things and making things alright for people and in the End he will become Ultimate God and will live happily after.Basically its a fix it type fanfic.
