naruto kakashi sharingan fanfiction

Meh, this isn't bad. However, both Naruto and Sasuke have been working hard for the past four years had less/equal amount of development as lee had in 1 year and several months. Naruto almost passed out from Zabuza's killing intent but was okay with Kuramas, who last time I checked is the strongest of the nine tail beasts. The training in the academy was fine, but the results were underwhelming. They should at least be able to defeat Kakashi without the Sharingan individually. Yes, Kakashi is a veteran, but he is a stagnated veteran. He barely improved from the 14 years old version of himself and highly depends on his Sharingan. Kakashi can't use the Chidori without it. Overall, the power scaling is BS. Here is how it should have been. Graduation: Naruto = Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Low Jonin Sasuke (Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Elite Jounin Sakura = Low Genin Kakashi = Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Post Wave Arc : Naruto = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Low S-class Sakura = Low Chunin Time Skip 3-years: Naruto = S-class Naruto ( Chakra Mode) = Low SS-class Naruto (Kurama Mode) = High SS-class Sasuke = Low S-class Sasuke (Sharingan) = S-class Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Mangekyo Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Lightning Mangekyo Sharingan) = Low SS-class Sasuke (Perfect Susanoo) = SS class Sakura = Elite Jonin Kakashi = Elite Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Low S-class

There is a big problem with the age of the main character. Kakashi created the Chidori when he was 12 years old during the 3rd Great Ninja War. Considering that Kakashi at the beginning of the Naruto manga was 26 years old and the main character of this fanfiction is 18 it means that your character created the chidori at the age of four.

Before I read any of it, the eyes on the cover look like Sasuke's Mangekyo Sharingan!(Not the eternal one) Go watch "Naruto" and "Naruto Shippuden"! Great anime! !!!Spoilers about Naruto/Naruto Shippuden below!!! !!!May ruin your day!!!! !!!Why are you still reading?!? OK, OK!!! Go on!!! Read the spoilers!!! Naruto can't do Clones, tho can do Shadow Clones at master level!(LOL) Naruto gets stonger than Sasuke! Sasuke will go to Orochimaru! Garra will become Kazekage! The masked member of Akatsuki in not Uchiha Madara, BUT Uchiha Obito! Neji will die! Kakashi will lose his sharingan! In the end Sasuke won't get imprisoned! Instead of imprisonment, Orochimaru gets "Home arrest"!

I like the way it shows how Kakashi steadily gets stronger, and I appreciate how he builds up relationships with the characters even though he is not the original Kakashi. However, it does annoy me that there are some parts that don't fit to canon. For example, Kakashi seals off the Sharingan so that it doesn't drain his chakra. Ok, that's smart. But he can still use Chidori/Raikiri without the Sharingan. The whole point/challenge of chidori was that no one other than a sharingan user could use it. That was why chidori was perfected after Kakashi received Obito's sharingan. But most of my complaints on that front are minute details, so if you don't really care much about sticking close to canon, then it doesn't really matter. What I really love the most is the stability of updates. One chapter per day--that's the definition of paradise.