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Daoist730sPk
Daoist730sPkLv111mth
2024-04-26 00:24

There is a big problem with the age of the main character. Kakashi created the Chidori when he was 12 years old during the 3rd Great Ninja War. Considering that Kakashi at the beginning of the Naruto manga was 26 years old and the main character of this fanfiction is 18 it means that your character created the chidori at the age of four.

I'm Inside Naruto Manga

Iampoorguy
3.6
228 Chs

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Desire96
Desire96Lv4

Lol, A 4-year old Genius

9mth
Desire96
Desire96Lv4

you haven't read the book properly, Mc is 18 when Kakashi is 20, so created Chidori before 10 years, YOu might have gotten confused due to in manga showing Naruto from chapter 1, Just read till chapter 11, It's revealed there

9mth
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Daoist730sPk
Daoist730sPkLv1

I do not understand what you mean.

Desire96:you haven't read the book properly, Mc is 18 when Kakashi is 20, so created Chidori before 10 years, YOu might have gotten confused due to in manga showing Naruto from chapter 1, Just read till chapter 11, It's revealed there
9mth
Desire96
Desire96Lv4

Mc and Kakashi have 2 Y age gap

Daoist730sPk:I do not understand what you mean.
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Daoist730sPk
Daoist730sPkLv1

I read this fanfiction two months ago and Kakashi and the protagonist are not only 2 years apart. I don't know if the author changed anything.

Desire96:Mc and Kakashi have 2 Y age gap
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Desire96
Desire96Lv4

you misunderstood smth, read till ch 11

Daoist730sPk:I read this fanfiction two months ago and Kakashi and the protagonist are not only 2 years apart. I don't know if the author changed anything.
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Extra_char
Extra_charLv2

right now kakashi is 20 hes 26 when the cannon starts wich means when naruto is 12 and his 6 currently so he created chidori when his 10 and ur math is wrong

8mth
Daoist730sPk
Daoist730sPkLv1

My calculations were right. Maybe the fanfiction has been modified but I can't know that.

Extra_char:right now kakashi is 20 hes 26 when the cannon starts wich means when naruto is 12 and his 6 currently so he created chidori when his 10 and ur math is wrong
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tedmosby2016
tedmosby2016Lv14

very disappointing. the MC is a passenger in the story line with no real motivation to do anything. he just sits there waiting for things to happen.

11mth

Qwerttipper
QwerttipperLv4

Why do authors just repost cn translation instead of rewriting them. Also, the author does not mention it as a repost so it seems very scummy.

11mth
Runawayy_
Runawayy_Lv3

Raw name????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

1yr
egeli
egeliLv4

raw halini okudum mangayla çok tutarsızlık var kisame itachi çocukken akatsukiye katılıyor hanzo ölüyor pein yerine geçiyor konoha bilmiyor üstelik olay örgüsüne bakılırsa animede danzo yahikoyu ölüme zorluyor romanda bahsedilmiyor

1yr
Glebby_Boi
Glebby_BoiLv4

I will keep this short. The quality of the translation is good, I am not sure where the story will go or how it will progress, but he MC’s and the casts’ characters are likable and authentic (respectively) and overall the narrative is a bit slow paced but in a satisfying way. Decent read!👌🏻

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Harper_Lynen
Harper_LynenLv1

its a really good novel and definitely worth a read. I really enjoyed the dynamic between being friends with itachi while teaching sasuke I'm sure it'll be interesting to see how sasuke reacts once he finds out his uchiha friend was itachi. the pacing is a lil slow but its fairly consistent updates so it equals out.

8mth
Extra_char
Extra_charLv2

I read the raw version, there are many inconsistencies for the betteer i don't remember exactly but yahiku didn't survive and and the mc joins the akatsuki much later after he had a direct conflict with danzo

8mth
Kay_smiles101
Kay_smiles101Lv4

It's very interesting. The translation is overall good. Keep it up 👍

8mth
Ficmastery
FicmasteryLv4

please dont drop this, the novel concept is new, and the write quality is pretty good.

11mth
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