new belgium brewery pwner story

Quite the amuzing story :) The caracters are funny and the plot relaxing. I like the fact that they are not really enemies that are ruining the relaxed air of this novel. Sorry if my english is bad but i'm from belgium and my monther tongue is French

Be aware: Mc grew up in Belgium since age 5 and go to Germany when he was 12 until now so 16. But every damn chapters, it mention he's from China or a chinese player.

The story development is nice and all.. the mc is believes in using his head more often than fists. So far the world building is going fine too. The only problem I have is with the way you describe every little action. Some places where questions need not be asked, they are still added making it unnecessary. Like if Lucian reached a door, he will ask Kiana- I guess this is the place. The mc doesn't need confirmation from his Kiana for every little things. Somethings can be written in a simple way- Kiana bring me some food. We don't always need the conversation of - I am feeling a bit hungry, should we have our food now? Lets head out then.. I feel like that 80% of the texts in the story are conversations like that. It has been like 250 something chapters but I feel like I read about 50 chapters. Whatever was written can be compressed in such low amount of chapters. I don't hate more descriptive stories but there is a balance between too much and too little. Well I understand the need to keep up the word count and the need for new ideas. But having a scene stretched on for like 10 chapters isn't fun. The brewery plan itself took like I don't know how many chapters. Three chapters were of him going there to check on the brewery and another chapter was about the the brewery is working. Details are good but unnecessary details makes me want to skip paras after paras. So I hope the author can change this. Sometimes I can literally feel my heart burn with how slow things are.

The chapters have matured ($16.00) later, engliglishis csptured very well just the "tenses" of the language is very hard to learn. I am American but raised in uk and Australia during my formative years. I understand the phonetic issues a that affect pronouncing words irregularly . Lived in germany Belgium since and honestly can say my vernacular has not improved .

sixty chapters are not enough to give an accurate opinion: the story just began, and the rythm is not definite, the characters will evolve, only the bachkground is trully setup at this stage. I will give another more enlightened review when we reach 200 chapters. before that, it's mostly meneangless. for now the plot begins to be interesting, and i like the characters. I'm not an asian, so i can't judge the background. if the story was in belgium or france, i could do it, but as it is not so, i can't. fight, author! i'm waiting for the following chapters.