first scene of a story

The story is interesting but after skipping Emily’s first scene it paints a picture of a story where everything is left to the imagination. It says that they come later but this feels a novel with 1 scene very 100-200 chapters, enough to justify the tags, but not be enjoyable.

At first reading this story....I feeling in love and feel very interesting with plotting story and building development character so excite me to know and then read non-stop scene by scene and the chapter another chapter. This story really going smoothly and so enjoying to read.

First of all the title of your story hooked me, then the way you described the scene of rain in the first chapter was amazing and I just wanted to read more and more, overall it was a good story with a captivating story-line.

This story was nice just that sometimes it became a bit confusing at certain steps... For example when there was a scene of flash back .... And the first scene.. Else too good efforts by the writer loved the character looking forward towards the new character

This story is funny. The characters are accurate. The scene when Venti drives over Bennett is something I see happening. The first chapter is great.