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nykka
nykkaLv56yr
2018-09-14 06:42

Alright time for an honest review about this novel, I've read the raws and I finished the novel (just because I invested too much time reading untill the point of no return), What I can tell you to expect is an MC that is gonna get cucked every 2 volumes (approx 80-100 chapters), Same thing happening over and over, reaches the top of where he's living just to realize he's actually nothing (could even be considered a mortal with a longer life span) in the bigger picture of his world, No actual characters except for the MC (To describe the MC's personality, he might seem a bit badass in the chapters translated so far, but he's faaaaaaar from a badass, an absolute cuck that lowers his head the moment he meets someone with a bigger di.ck than his, blaming it on 'tactical surrender' and giving every possible excuse that has no relation to do with what he's just done.), As I said, same thing happening over and over again, New realms every two volumes, Just when you think the MC finally is strong and has some influence, BAM, A BIGGER STRONKER SCARIER CHARACTER HAS APPEARED, at some point you actually stop reading most of the chapter, you will be just waiting for the next breakthrough cause everything else is just extra and will be forgotten in the next ten to twenty chapters. TLDR? Shitty, very cheap novel filled with new stupid realms every two volumes, the MC is never good enough.

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WanderingFighter
WanderingFighterLv3

ohh thanks for your review

WanderingFighter
WanderingFighterLv3

exp

WanderingFighter:ohh thanks for your review
MyumaraOri
MyumaraOriLv4

Thanks god I didn't read it...

CocoaButter
CocoaButterLv11

Thank you so much. I wanted to give it another try because I stopped at when he was trying to save his brother. I had enough and stopped reading it. Thankfully it doesn't get better so I won't waste my time any further.

Mandaline
MandalineLv10

I think yours is the first correct review i read till now. Total useless MC and ****ty storyline to the point when author finds nothing better than to kill him and reincarnate in order to start a totally new storyline...total waste of time

Jus7aguy
Jus7aguyLv15

stopped reading the review moment I hit "MC gets cucked every few chapters". Most people throwing the abbreviation of that word around don't actually know what it means and use it to describe "not super macho he man idiot who thinks with his balls and brawn, in that order".

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

yeah at first I thought he meant that mc wife gets ntr'd. Hope the reviewer actually gets cucked for overusing the word.

Jus7aguy:stopped reading the review moment I hit "MC gets cucked every few chapters". Most people throwing the abbreviation of that word around don't actually know what it means and use it to describe "not super macho he man idiot who thinks with his balls and brawn, in that order".
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kseriousr
kseriousrLv4

Extremely boring. It's basically a rehash of coiling dragon. What's with all the zero chapter read five star reviews dominating the front page... My biggest problems with the story are pacing, followed by poor world building and one dimensional characters. Mentioning a city with tens of millions of people, how many thousands of cities, provinces, worlds and star systems there are do not equat to world building. You have to show that the world around you matters. Did your mc lost his flying bison in a city and it's so vast you can't find it? If not, than it doesn't matter how many hundreds of millions of people are in the city, they are but numbers and irrelevant and GOD, is the entire world in this story so irrelevant! It seems like nothing is happening in the world unless the mc is interacting with it. There are no sense of realism there. Mc lives in a castle, goes to some other castle, kills someone as a mission, comes back, mopes around in his castle because that's how you run a city, and voila he's the strongest in the world and goes to some place and... God the story lacks pacing and so many poorly done time skips. Show that passing of time matters before you do a time skip, not just when you need a powerup and can't find a way to engage your readers. ISSTH did a hundred year skip and I wasn't mad because before that I was with the mc on his day to day adventure, learning how important a day can be. And god the time skips in this story are so lame. He basically goes from zero to hevean rank in a few dozon chapters and heaven to legend in a couple more and by a hundred he achieves transcendence, the level that author introduced to be strongest at the start of the story. How do you keep writing once you've done that? Why, do a dbz twist, introduce a few more levels.And do you know how many interesting things happen to his life in the time he gets op as fk? You can count them on one finger, that's four if you are lazy, and god this story is so lazily written! You know, you can still feed on a lazily written, poorly paced story in a vacuum world, if the characters and their banters make up for it, and believe it or not, author fks that up really spectacularly. The characters have no depth, no complexity, no autonomy, no agency. They just exist to fill up a space. The two loving parents that got in trouble to motivate the mc, the cute lil bro to motivate the mc, the backstabbing gal to motivate the mc and hype the mysogonist fan base, none of them serves any other purpose and once you realise how utterly robotic and dull the characters are, how do you connect with them in any way? At least make up for their lack of personality with quips or humor but no, it's a serious story. A seriously dull story. And fk this Alice trope. When you have less personality than a side character with no dialogue, you don't get the girl, deal with with.

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