Uncle_Sheogorath

mc looks like a femboy

Mc is an unsanctioned Psyker. I am calling the inquisition. Mc is an unsanctioned Psyker. I am calling the inquisition. Mc is an unsanctioned Psyker. I am calling the inquisition.

Wrong. Try to use the n world. it will be extremely effective.

Listen up, you webnovel readers, because this is me, your lord behind this book, giving you the lowdown on my own twisted brainchild. Picture Juan Morales, your average Dullsville schlub, a 24 year old Mexican kid drowning in High School DxD episodes and Naruto dreams, stuck in a basement that smells like mildew and regret. He is you, the loser with a cracked phone and a coffee stained hoodie, waiting for destiny to slap some sense into him. And boy, does it deliver. I tossed Juan a system because what else do you give a nobody who fantasizes about Rias Gremory? He starts off all gritty and hopeful, jogging through town, climbing trees, sparking tiny flames like he is some budget anime hero. Classic, right? You will eat up the slow grind, the power creep, nodding along like “yep, this is my jam.” But here is the kicker: I could not resist flipping the table. The missions get wild, and Juan, poor bastard, dives headfirst into a mess that would make even the most shameless MC blush. This book is my love letter to you system enjoyers, a mirror held up to your escapist fantasies with a smirk.

So your argument is originality? Invent a true slur? lol. No, this isn't about originality. But about describing someone and telling someone how much you find them repulsive.

Wrong answer. The time of old fossils who cry about racism is over. A good chunk of our generation doesn't give the fuck any more and slurs?? Who cares.

Cringe. I am out. I know no one cares.

Before diving into this novel, I was worried due to the negative reviews, especially those criticizing the main character as a weak bitch who always loses. But after reading it, I realised those opinions were WRONG. Those readers expect an overpowered protagonist without any logic as if somehow a normie from the modern world suddenly transported to Naruto world could magically gain all the skills and attract a harem. No... the bad reviews are from readers who are compensating for being losers. Now for the actual review: This fic, as I mentioned earlier, is about a normal dude who suddenly wakes up in the body of a student at a shinobi academy. And yeah, as you’d expect, the MC from the real world doesn’t have jack shit in terms of skills, not even the basics, when the shinobi academy is basically an assassin/military school. The start is slow with the MC adjusting to his new reality and fumbling around, trying to get past his total lack of knowledge and ability. It makes sense he struggles early on because he’s a modern guy who doesn’t know shit about ninja skills. But TRUST ME, IT GETS BETTER. By the end, I’d say the MC turns into a seriously talented badass through hard work, and the progression is GOOD and REALISTIC. You can see how he claws his way up from nothing to become a legit powerful fighter. Right now, in terms of talent, he’s maybe one tier/ one in a half below genetic geniuses like Itachi, Sasuke, or Naruto. As for his personality, he’s no weak pussy. Morally, he’s pretty much the ideal shinobi. He follows shinobi morals and kills enemies without hesitation, ruthless as hell. He pretty much says it outright he wants to be a shinobi and follow the progression ladder or die trying. Obviously, it’s not like that from day one, but the way he develops feels natural and earned. The biggest strengths of this story are how damn fun it is to watch the MC go from a nobody to a somebody, plus all the wild shenanigans he gets into along the way. The plot’s fresh with no lazy canon rehash bullshit here. The world-building is top-notch too. You really get sucked into the story and the Naruto universe. I’d highly recommend this to any Naruto fan. Romance? There are some sprinkled here and there. Nothing concrete yet, so we’ll see where it goes.

Rehabilitation does not work. Criminal scum deserve punishment.