The world is advance where a slightly rich friend can have a personnel jet that can be land in front of people courtyard without any freaking rule to disallow that I mean what if the jet malfunction and hit the building , people can die from any random explosion just because the stupid decision human can make (at least explain that the jet is automatic or have set pattern of air highway since it's the future ) the author don't even describe how futuristic the world is like how the gadget and tool efficiency .Now the current story is just a forced Xianxia in a Sci-fi world which is F*cking terrible with no story development about how normal civilian is given right to even go to the *mysterious space called God’s Sanctuary, where lived numerous unknown creatures. Here, humans will make the greatest leap in their evolution to create the most glorious epoch in history* quote from the synopsis , IT'S JUST A NEW DIMENSION OR A POCKET REALM ,THE STORY DON'T EVEN TELL YOU HOW DO THEY EVEN KNOW IT'S A SPACE AND NOT TELEPORT SOMEWHERE ELSE. THERE ARE NO SCIENTIST AT ALL JUST FORCED XIANXIA IN THE FUTURE WHERE TECHNOLOGY IS USELESS INSIDE THE SPACE AND SUDDENLY ALL PEOPLE DON'T CARE ABOUT OTHER DYING BECAUSE OF STRONG MONSTER AS IF IT'S A GAME .OH WAIT IT IS HALF A GAME BECAUSE THE UNWORKING TECHNOLOGY SUDDENLY BECAME A SYSTEM THAT CAN MEASURE EVERY UNIT OF GENE AS STAT THAT IMPROVE YOUR MARTIAL ART'S POWER (GENE DON'T WORK LIKE THAT AND GENE DOESN'T HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH SOUL SO THAT MIRACLE LIKE A BEAST SLAIN SUDDENLY CAN GIVE YOU ARMOR WITHOUT EXPENDING ANY ENERGY FROM ANYWHERE JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE LUCKY ARE STUPID!) The character literally don't have fear in this world as if everyone just got out of world war 7 and don't care people died by them or to be precised just next to them ,until the author find it convenient to make them scared or traumatised(oh my just like it's normal to see someone dies in battle again'st raid boss note:RPG) there are no real true professional for hire that can be find here like mercenary , assassin/bounty hunter , SOLDIEEEEERRRRR that is send there to investigate but college people who just learn a little bit of martial art is send there as if every government want it's people to live past 500 years for no cost and everyone can teleport in and out within a convenient room for everyone each , the teleport room have no cost and tax doesn't exist in this world. I'M DONE
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LIKEHere a normal review presented by a weeb sincerely, but seriously thou there are no background about the civilization and why they are like that ,pretty much are A BLOOD HUNGRY MACHINE AND CRUEL something that should be done by COMPETING MERCENARY and SOLDIER of company or country to gain strong soldier and lengthen leader reining time . I mean like just slightly rich or famous person *I have kill thousand people and have henchmen soldier roar! I am an evil rap*st roar! Seriously?
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haven't read it yet but it sounds like those b-list movies like sharknado. i like sharknado. its fun to just watch and point out all the plot holes and illogical stuff.
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Okay then whatever float your boat , have fun!
WillMissQ:haven't read it yet but it sounds like those b-list movies like sharknado. i like sharknado. its fun to just watch and point out all the plot holes and illogical stuff.
merci Monsieur weeb
Sounds like a fairly normal online novel...
if 'Fairly normal online novel' of your's is at this level. I don't wont to see something worse than this novel, I mean your normal rating novel is trash novel rating for me that I can find lying around in RoyalRoadlegend site, there is so much ******* or beginner writer there that only the top 15% of novel there can be called a real novel
Ebony:Sounds like a fairly normal online novel...
Alas, denying that novels of this quality are the norm on the internet does not make it untrue. If you are looking for quality literature, you are in the wrong place. Maybe your top 15% are well written, but they're all mindless entertainment anyway. Once the quality of the reading material you are assessing drops below a certain level, there is no point to discriminating. You will gain nothing from reading essentially any online novel other than amusement, so it does not matter when one is more stupid than usual. Stupid is fun to watch, and it's no worse than reading a more well-constructed but equally empty book.
WeebMonsieur:if 'Fairly normal online novel' of your's is at this level. I don't wont to see something worse than this novel, I mean your normal rating novel is trash novel rating for me that I can find lying around in RoyalRoadlegend site, there is so much ******* or beginner writer there that only the top 15% of novel there can be called a real novel
I don't like these kind of forced logic novel like fantasy, xianxia and such.., but since author wrote the story well and slowly integrate it's world logic I can read it but novel that's just force the story without making the reader comfortable or at least understand what's going in it is too much of a forced to me. : ^) yes stupid is fun to watch just like the guys that watch Sharknado but as I get older I just want read something that can left me wonder of what's going to happen..... not reviewing how stupid the product is, so in another word just someone that want good stuff. The ******* work in royalroadl.com might be bad but there is some that's just bad in grammar yet very great storytelling and how the world build(they generally need editor really). sooooooo it's like finding diamond in mud there when you're not looking for novel at the top whatever, but when people find these works it's still going to the top thou and many volunteer or dealer will become an editor so i'm still going around in RRL. good literature product is a good story like a nice suit and a bad one just gibberish that make my head hurt. o***
Ebony:Alas, denying that novels of this quality are the norm on the internet does not make it untrue. If you are looking for quality literature, you are in the wrong place. Maybe your top 15% are well written, but they're all mindless entertainment anyway. Once the quality of the reading material you are assessing drops below a certain level, there is no point to discriminating. You will gain nothing from reading essentially any online novel other than amusement, so it does not matter when one is more stupid than usual. Stupid is fun to watch, and it's no worse than reading a more well-constructed but equally empty book.
You just summerized many of the holes that killed my mood while reading this novel. The consistency of the world is close to 0.
Welcome to hate zone my friend! Here have some hate!
BrokenOath:You just summerized many of the holes that killed my mood while reading this novel. The consistency of the world is close to 0.
If you're looking for good storytelling, reading web novels will get you nowhere. May I suggest actual books?
WeebMonsieur:Welcome to hate zone my friend! Here have some hate!
Yes that would do, good sir!
Zeph:If you're looking for good storytelling, reading web novels will get you nowhere. May I suggest actual books?
I would suggest you write a review after reading at least 10 chapters.
Already did but it was not count by Qidian somehow mister :3÷==€
SonataL:I would suggest you write a review after reading at least 10 chapters.
Just don't minds my old review if you have different thought about this novel, you can't let others shape your self. (that's called manipulation after all)
SonataL:I would suggest you write a review after reading at least 10 chapters.
Okay thanks for clearing it up!
WeebMonsieur:Already did but it was not count by Qidian somehow mister :3÷==€
I am very late at love liking ... ;-;
SonataL:Okay thanks for clearing it up!
That's where you're wrong, I've read some amazing novels not for amusement but to feel the world the characters are in, to feel what it would be like to risk your life in these terrifying and extraordinary environments which perhaps do exist in some other plane of existence. Perhaps one day when we die we might be sucked into such a world.
Ebony:Alas, denying that novels of this quality are the norm on the internet does not make it untrue. If you are looking for quality literature, you are in the wrong place. Maybe your top 15% are well written, but they're all mindless entertainment anyway. Once the quality of the reading material you are assessing drops below a certain level, there is no point to discriminating. You will gain nothing from reading essentially any online novel other than amusement, so it does not matter when one is more stupid than usual. Stupid is fun to watch, and it's no worse than reading a more well-constructed but equally empty book.
RRL has some really nice stories. It even made me want to try writing my own stories to see how hard it is for the author to get their thoughts across and it's pretty hard. Even when you come up with good stories, it hardly ever translate to words well. It's tempting to go the lazy route and replicate the things other successful stories did. Meta / Cliches are like junk food, tried and tested, easily accessible. I'm waiting for the next book of ASOIAF, Dresden, Lightbringer series and here I am reading a ton of CN in the mean time.
WeebMonsieur:I don't like these kind of forced logic novel like fantasy, xianxia and such.., but since author wrote the story well and slowly integrate it's world logic I can read it but novel that's just force the story without making the reader comfortable or at least understand what's going in it is too much of a forced to me. : ^) yes stupid is fun to watch just like the guys that watch Sharknado but as I get older I just want read something that can left me wonder of what's going to happen..... not reviewing how stupid the product is, so in another word just someone that want good stuff. The ******* work in royalroadl.com might be bad but there is some that's just bad in grammar yet very great storytelling and how the world build(they generally need editor really). sooooooo it's like finding diamond in mud there when you're not looking for novel at the top whatever, but when people find these works it's still going to the top thou and many volunteer or dealer will become an editor so i'm still going around in RRL. good literature product is a good story like a nice suit and a bad one just gibberish that make my head hurt. o***
Huh... Haven't read Dresden yet. Well that's new! :D
kseriousr:RRL has some really nice stories. It even made me want to try writing my own stories to see how hard it is for the author to get their thoughts across and it's pretty hard. Even when you come up with good stories, it hardly ever translate to words well. It's tempting to go the lazy route and replicate the things other successful stories did. Meta / Cliches are like junk food, tried and tested, easily accessible. I'm waiting for the next book of ASOIAF, Dresden, Lightbringer series and here I am reading a ton of CN in the mean time.
