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Devil
DevilLv147yr
2017-11-03 07:30

I wouldn't waste my time reading this. Nothing against the translators, but the author did NOT write a good story. The plot is nonexistent and includes stupid tricks and plot armour. The world building is tripe. The COINCIDENCES and actions of the characters are just fucking annoying to the extreme.

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Kyurem1337
Kyurem1337Lv5

Don't blame the author for it , all xanxia and wuxia novels have extremely thick plot armour .

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Yami_Long
Yami_LongLv4

The MC can probably walk naked through fire without harm due to plot armor ;)

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JACKMA
JACKMALv5

its fine once in a while to read some heavy armor :D

Daoist_Longnose
Daoist_LongnoseLv5

Like pretty much all the novels on this website. I'm still going to give it try, I will come back on that review to insult that novel if it's really bad lol.

AuthorWiz
AuthorWizLv13

It's true. This is much worse than other novels, incredibly cliche, and the coincidences are dumb to an extreme. They are far too many and completely ruin my immersion.

Thatch
ThatchLv10

Please sir, I beg of u, write ur honest review on 'the strongest gene' as well

Enlightened_Being
Enlightened_BeingLv6

what the guy says is true, there are so many dumb plots where nothing makes sense at all, the MC is stu.pid as hell, maybe they forgot to evolve their brain while trying to evolve their gene and also the world building is too small, this is the type of novel where everyone bumps into the same town every now and then.

Runicorn
RunicornLv10

Personally I like this type of novel

Legend476
Legend476Lv4

It really just comes down to readers preference. Honestly, ive read worse novels but this one is a different kind of bad. It is sooo cliche and badly written that you go to the extreme and actually like it. Im torn.

Supreme_Night
Supreme_NightLv5

Before you critize, at least read past chapter 10. The novel gets really god. So stop hosting and move on.

Supreme_Night
Supreme_NightLv5

Correction: hating

WhiteDragon32
WhiteDragon32Lv4

This one at least has a story to it and has other interesting things going on. I like this LN because it is different than the others that sit in a cave and cultivate. Then go out cause issues and kill people and piss of those guy's grandady and then they run away and cultivate again and come out once they can kill that grandady and laugh at them while doing it. Then they go out and cause issues again and then hide to cultivate again and again and over and over and over.

Reiii
ReiiiLv4

Yep

wuxiaworld4life
wuxiaworld4lifeLv5

uhh... this mc has LITERAL plot armor. so please gtfo LOL

Kyurem1337:Don't blame the author for it , all xanxia and wuxia novels have extremely thick plot armour .
wuxiaworld4life
wuxiaworld4lifeLv5

it's like The Room of web novels

Legend476:It really just comes down to readers preference. Honestly, ive read worse novels but this one is a different kind of bad. It is sooo cliche and badly written that you go to the extreme and actually like it. Im torn.
Legend476
Legend476Lv4

Hahaha your reply made me laugh out loud

wuxiaworld4life:it's like The Room of web novels
HYiChen
HYiChenLv5

Is it really that bad

Devil
DevilLv14

It really is.

HYiChen:Is it really that bad
Guardial
GuardialLv12

Read past chapter 21 before posting a review like this. It's not the best story in the world, no. But it's not as horrible as you make it out to be. The coincidence that you speak of with the golden beetle and the stone are almost there only ones. Not to mention that the stone he gets has VERY little impact to the story. It's barely mentioned after it's first introduced.

josephoct31
josephoct31Lv10

Gotta point out the plot armor here is literally armor 😁

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littlefrench
littlefrenchLv14

first thing : I enjoy this novel the reasons : - the MC s poised, he keeps his calm even when he is insulted, as he needs to protect his family, so far he's the only that's really done that in what I've read, at the same time he doesn't let weaker people step on him when it shouldn't happen - the MC is not a complete cheat like existence like it often happens, there is a system but everyone has access to it. so far there's only one time during which it can be said there's plot armor (the stone) - In the "cultivation world" there cannot be the intervention of someone overwhelmingly stronger as they go to other areas after becomming strong enough and they can't come back, I think it is great for the stability of the novel, and it enshures there won't be a ridiculous jump in strength coming from nowhere for the MC - the world building has started in the 70ish chapters, so don't worry about it, in any case the novel is likely to have more than 600 chapters (or so I think - in any case it does have a great potential in terms of number of chapters) the last point leads to me criticizing the haters : how THE HELL can you criticize a novel on its world building when you've only read as few as 10-20-30 chapters ???!? are you for real ?! I mean, seriously all the novels I've read on Qidian so far are bound to have hundreds if not more than a thousand chapters, just give the novels a chance to grow and set a foundation for the characters before the world, you are just being ridiculous otherwise, it's like relying on first impression to categorize people, it's nonsensical Thanks for reading me :)

WeebMonsieur
WeebMonsieurLv5

The world is advance where a slightly rich friend can have a personnel jet that can be land in front of people courtyard without any freaking rule to disallow that I mean what if the jet malfunction and hit the building , people can die from any random explosion just because the stupid decision human can make (at least explain that the jet is automatic or have set pattern of air highway since it's the future ) the author don't even describe how futuristic the world is like how the gadget and tool efficiency .Now the current story is just a forced Xianxia in a Sci-fi world which is F*cking terrible with no story development about how normal civilian is given right to even go to the *mysterious space called God’s Sanctuary, where lived numerous unknown creatures. Here, humans will make the greatest leap in their evolution to create the most glorious epoch in history* quote from the synopsis , IT'S JUST A NEW DIMENSION OR A POCKET REALM ,THE STORY DON'T EVEN TELL YOU HOW DO THEY EVEN KNOW IT'S A SPACE AND NOT TELEPORT SOMEWHERE ELSE. THERE ARE NO SCIENTIST AT ALL JUST FORCED XIANXIA IN THE FUTURE WHERE TECHNOLOGY IS USELESS INSIDE THE SPACE AND SUDDENLY ALL PEOPLE DON'T CARE ABOUT OTHER DYING BECAUSE OF STRONG MONSTER AS IF IT'S A GAME .OH WAIT IT IS HALF A GAME BECAUSE THE UNWORKING TECHNOLOGY SUDDENLY BECAME A SYSTEM THAT CAN MEASURE EVERY UNIT OF GENE AS STAT THAT IMPROVE YOUR MARTIAL ART'S POWER (GENE DON'T WORK LIKE THAT AND GENE DOESN'T HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH SOUL SO THAT MIRACLE LIKE A BEAST SLAIN SUDDENLY CAN GIVE YOU ARMOR WITHOUT EXPENDING ANY ENERGY FROM ANYWHERE JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE LUCKY ARE STUPID!) The character literally don't have fear in this world as if everyone just got out of world war 7 and don't care people died by them or to be precised just next to them ,until the author find it convenient to make them scared or traumatised(oh my just like it's normal to see someone dies in battle again'st raid boss note:RPG) there are no real true professional for hire that can be find here like mercenary , assassin/bounty hunter , SOLDIEEEEERRRRR that is send there to investigate but college people who just learn a little bit of martial art is send there as if every government want it's people to live past 500 years for no cost and everyone can teleport in and out within a convenient room for everyone each , the teleport room have no cost and tax doesn't exist in this world. I'M DONE

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