I’ve read a lot so if I critique your book, just know it’s just tough love and I’m most likely gonna keep on reading... unless your novel is trash and the grammar sucks
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Oh no. The queen of escalation had things escalate? Who could’ve ever seen that coming?
Ironic
Because you are a sociopath
God no. Fuck no. That’s a terrible idea.
This gag is getting old. Over and over and over and over and over and over and over again. You just keep doing it. Holy fuck come up with something new. It’s nothing but anime tropes and repetitive running gags with plot on the fucking side. It was funny the first time. It was cute the second time. It was annoying the third time. It got worse the fourth time. I’m done with it the fifth time. Just chill the fuck out. How many more chapters throughout the story is this going to be a goddamn thing?
Your deviating into nothing but anime tropes at this point. It’s less plot and more “comedy“ tropes. Honestly, it’s getting a bit too much.
You either full send the harem or you full send the OTP. None of this halfway nonsense. One or the other, pick and choose.