SonataL
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The obscure we see eventually. The completely obvious, it seems, takes longer. ~Edward R. Murrow
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SonataL5 years agoReplied to IzanmiIf you want a good One Piece FF, I recommend reading "A Gamer in South Blue" by LordVishnu. They recently came back so chapters are being updated again.
- SonataL5 years agoCommented
Kinda OP since it would also affect those significantly stronger than him by the 50% decrease in abilities.
- SonataL5 years agoCommented
Run on sentence
- SonataL5 years agoCommented
You're switching between present and past tense. You said "continued" which is past and then say "tries", which is present.
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You're good author! This is a fresh of breath air in this site so one day without a chapter is fine. Better to get quality chapters than a sick author.
- SonataL6 years agoCommented
I give you my stones
- SonataL6 years agoCommented
No. Same reason as the other 2, it seems a bit forced.
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