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daoi13
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2020-01-01 07:47

First of all, this author seems to have a problem with women and everyone who isn't "asian" (probably means chinese). There's plenty derogatory remarks about women and ample statements how asia, asians or asian culture is the best and everyone else falls behind. To some degree that's not exactly unusual for CNs but it's a bit too prevalent in this novel for my taste. The Translation is decent. There are no glaring grammar or spelling mistakes. But there's also no regard for sentence structure or "reading flow". So while you won't have problems understanding the story, it is also not an enjoyable read. The story is just bad though. Character design is about the only positive point I can find. Other character (than the MC) actually have their own personalities. They're not mindless puppets or empty dolls like you'll find in some other CNs. There's no "arrogant young master #123" and the characters aren't just stereotypes. But the world building and story progression is beyond bad. The story is nothing but a "look how awesome I am" show for the MC and the world building makes no f*ing sense. Not to mention there are tons of plotholes. For example: The MC chooses a humanoid Mecha in the virtual game world and everyone makes fun of him because of it, since the humanoid mecha has no armor. But then the MC goes on to oneshot everyone of his opponents anyway. So what exactly was the purpose of armor in the first place, if it doesn't protect against hits? And why would NO ONE ELSE get the idea "maybe dodging could work"?

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Jack_Balu
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I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out

timmyy_elm
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just about that armor mech statement u said the armor does help but you know the mc got the training sequence of future war gods in the cube thingy and war gods are like op af in this world like 500 years passed sense war gods were popular and all the families clans sects whatever forgot about them and the mc gets massive advantage in that he basically got a 1st class plane ticket to becoming a war god while everyone else is learning secondrate techniques while the mc is learning the basics to becoming a war god

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Sabin_Subedi_Fei · Sci-fi
4.2
315 Chs