timmyy_elm

griffin he's been making music for SS on yt since the 2nd nm days

sir your just wrong sunny admitted he liked nephis in the third NM sir...

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gotta say the cliffhanger w/ arthur made me feel real pain and as a result as I was reading this I was tweaking out just thinking about arthur and wanting this to be over. But, its not bad pretty good nightmare I think from an objective point of view it would have been better if you slowed down the nightmare and focused on developing the characters in it and kept things more gradual rather then one big moment king crashing out and big fight over you know. I think the 2nd nm from ss is the best example for this but then again If you did that I would have to suffer more withdraw but maybe I would have grown to fall in love w/ the nightmare Idk

the only issue with your head cannon is the doom war is called the doom war because it destroyed everything ie very little survivors of ANY KIND anywhere besides sanctuaries like the tomb of ariel the only things that weren't destroyed before were the realms of the gods(and other very specific locations) is the kingdom one of them? SS lore can get draining I think this nightmare makes sense if these people are part of one of the realms

can you remind me sylvies aspect ability for both I forgot I know dormant lets her cast spells/ make shields out of mana, and her awakened one has sometihng to do with tagging things or putting mana in them I think im kind of confused on how her awakened one functions and what it really does

feels like a missed opportunity to skip mordret arc did he not try to manipulate neph at all? Did she just not keep the mirror fragment she has a lot of the same memories sunny had. It would have been interesting seeing the two of them clash would mordret manipulate her extremely easy even easier then sunny or would she catch on idk what is the big M even doing breh still stuck in his prison? bro is important to the plot

Just wanted to let you know from the bit I've read you have a really amazing sense of detail Maybe consider writing your own story I havent read too much yet though