The grammar seems to be a bit off here and there and that makes it difficult to get into the story. Also the main characters thought process seems weird to me, I can't imagine doing any of the things he does if I was in the same situation.
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The translation quality gets better as the story progresses. MC intelligence and thought process improves from infancy to **** level. If I remember correctly, about chapter 25~30 it gets tolerable.
Qidian should get a Grammarly enterprise license for all their translators...
Yeah almost all of the earlier chapters need to be rechecked.
Actually this novel used to be in webnovel but some time ago they stopped updating it Actually it isn't that great of a story And the world building is pretty limited since while reading it I felt like the story is happening in a dark world Plus it s weird for webnovel to drop a novel than bring it as if it s something new
Actually this novel used to be in webnovel but some time ago they stopped updating it Actually it isn't that great of a story And the world building is pretty limited since while reading it I felt like the story is happening in a dark world Plus it s weird for webnovel to drop a novel than bring it as if it s something new
Ooh i remember this one seen it 2 years ago on a pirate website wait.... This comment is from 2 years ago so it was on this site once
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That's actually something like a legal business practice and Qidian knows nothing about legality except for sending Cease and Desist letterers against actually good translators and plagiarizing their work
just so cliche whit the "evil god " and "good god" that a redflag of an 50iq author no one is realy evil in fantasy setting and the mc is "good man" more like stupid naive and wuss
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your critique provides absolutely no constructive reasoning. are you just here to whine?
