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Shinobu
ShinobuLv157yr
2017-11-16 04:55

Very goo ๐Ÿ’ฒ๐Ÿ’ฒ๐Ÿ’ฒ๐Ÿ”ฐ๐Ÿ”ฐ๐Ÿ”ฐ๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿ”ฎโ˜€โ˜€โ˜€๐Ÿ„๐Ÿ„๐Ÿ„๐Ÿฅ๐Ÿฅ๐Ÿฅ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿถ๐Ÿถ๐Ÿถ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ‰๐Ÿ‰๐Ÿ‰๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿข๐Ÿ€๐Ÿ€๐Ÿ€๐Ÿ—ฟ๐Ÿ—ฟ๐Ÿ—ฟ๐Ÿ—ป๐Ÿ—ป๐Ÿ—ป๐Ÿญ๐Ÿญ๐Ÿญโ™จโ™จโ™จ๐Ÿšถ๐Ÿšถ๐Ÿšถ๐Ÿ”๐Ÿ”๐Ÿ”๐Ÿ”š๐Ÿ”š๐Ÿ”š๐Ÿ”š๐Ÿ”œ๐Ÿ”œ๐Ÿ”œโ™‹โ™‹โ™‹๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”ž๐Ÿ”žโš โš โš ๐Ÿ†“๐Ÿ†“๐Ÿ†“โœดโœดโœดโœณโœณโœณโœ”โœ”โœ”๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ซ๐Ÿ’ซ๐Ÿ’ซโ†•โ†•โ†•โ†”โ†”โ†”โ†˜โ†˜โ†˜โ†™โ†™โ†™โ†™โคดโคดโคดโคตโคตโคตโญโญโญ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸโ‡โ‡โ‡โœจโœจโœจ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ใ€ฐใ€ฐใ€ฐใ€ฐโ™ โ™ โ™ โ™ฆโ™ฆโ™ฆโ™ฃโ™ฃโ™ฃ๐Ÿ”˜๐Ÿ”˜๐Ÿ”˜

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Shinobu
ShinobuLv15

Very good***

darkviper20
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DexHy
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:;)

Bonelli
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'-'

ChongKenji
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(y)

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loser
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๐ŸŒŽ๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ๐Ÿ“ต๐Ÿ“ด

Deborahgold
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Nice

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Hmmm

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moehawkman
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The main reason I gave this novel such a low rating is that the author seems to constantly forget about previous things that YY has learned and/or characters that contribute to his power ups. One key example is his aspect totem, the 9 neonate. It is supposed to grow along with YY since it is a "beast mark of life" which allowed it to go through a heavenly tribulation back in the Tian Yuan world. However, nothing has happened to it since then. YY has grown multiple realms (nearly 4 full realms if I'm not wrong), but the 9 neo is still at the 1st tribulation which doesn't make any sense. He has eaten how many high level resources and nothing made it go through the 2nd tribulation? I call BS. Another example is the godly OP bow he received from the God Advent Tower spirit. From what I remember, it was made from divine beast parts which is on the same level of his 3-legged golden crow(don't quote me on this, didn't feel like re-reading that whole arc for this review). YY could use around 5-10% of its power when he was at the yuan opening realm(again, don't quote me on that), but he has never even touched the bow since leaving the Tian Yuan world. It's almost safe to assume that the author completely forgot about the bow entirely. Lastly, I gave this novel this rating because the author once said back when this novel used to be on GravityTales that he would flush out the main story within 500-800 chapters. This notice was around chapter 550 or so, but I have yet to see where the main story is supposed to go. I can see that YY will fight with the White Lunar Empire soon and obviously win due to plot armor and 1337 hax, but nothing about what happens from there. There is no big bad enemy at the end of the tunnel, no dark forces watching from the shadows, nothing so much as an inkling of knowledge on who/what YY will be fighting to end the story. I guess you could say that I've been waiting for something to be revealed and yet I feel disappointed every time. You could take my rant/review for a grain of salt, but this is just how I feel about this novel. I've been reading almost since the beginning, and I've just longing for the author to come up with more story telling that doesn't involve near useless random/stepping stone characters. Thanks for your time. :]

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