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AresRaLv47yr
2017-06-27 16:17

Ok so for translation quality and update stability they both get a high score as Cktalon is a beast in those areas, next story development, this story started nice and got drowned into its own fillers people don't realize it when they read bulks of chapters but when you read slowly you realize the author is just trying to milk it and add a lot of unnecessary things, pointless interactions and fodders. Character Design : as in alot of other CN's the characters are bland and lack realism and life overall it seem they are just puppets that present us the show. World Background : Meh, author tried a replica of Perfect World at the start but he lack the imagination of Chen Dong and his eloquence in describing his world, it end up looking like a game path where mc has to go from area A to area B in full boost without caring about neither of those areas in depth.

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moonKeLv5

good luck finding a Xianxia novel without filler, afterall how do you think they get to be 2k+ chapter ordeals? that's not really a valid complaint, because here you are, still reading the genre. think about all of your favorite Xianxia, got it? all of those novels have 100's of pages of filler, congrats theyre all 2.5 stars based on your reason.

RedSurgeLv12

Look for Martial World because martial world is the one b4 this Lin ming is mc in that

fiersharkLv5

Will all pray that the author make it more interesting

i_ship_mikayuuLv5

I happen to like that and i find the unrelistic part what makes it so fun to read but thats just me i love fiction were it would be impossible to really happen but like i said thats just my opinion

BlueCrystalLv4

Quest

Preshy5Lv4

Adding too many fillers hhhhhhmmm. Anyways at least it has little repetition compared to other novels on this site. The excessive and pointless repetition is killing my vibe.

Grandee1Lv11

Yea

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moehawkmanLv3

The main reason I gave this novel such a low rating is that the author seems to constantly forget about previous things that YY has learned and/or characters that contribute to his power ups. One key example is his aspect totem, the 9 neonate. It is supposed to grow along with YY since it is a "beast mark of life" which allowed it to go through a heavenly tribulation back in the Tian Yuan world. However, nothing has happened to it since then. YY has grown multiple realms (nearly 4 full realms if I'm not wrong), but the 9 neo is still at the 1st tribulation which doesn't make any sense. He has eaten how many high level resources and nothing made it go through the 2nd tribulation? I call BS. Another example is the godly OP bow he received from the God Advent Tower spirit. From what I remember, it was made from divine beast parts which is on the same level of his 3-legged golden crow(don't quote me on this, didn't feel like re-reading that whole arc for this review). YY could use around 5-10% of its power when he was at the yuan opening realm(again, don't quote me on that), but he has never even touched the bow since leaving the Tian Yuan world. It's almost safe to assume that the author completely forgot about the bow entirely. Lastly, I gave this novel this rating because the author once said back when this novel used to be on GravityTales that he would flush out the main story within 500-800 chapters. This notice was around chapter 550 or so, but I have yet to see where the main story is supposed to go. I can see that YY will fight with the White Lunar Empire soon and obviously win due to plot armor and 1337 hax, but nothing about what happens from there. There is no big bad enemy at the end of the tunnel, no dark forces watching from the shadows, nothing so much as an inkling of knowledge on who/what YY will be fighting to end the story. I guess you could say that I've been waiting for something to be revealed and yet I feel disappointed every time. You could take my rant/review for a grain of salt, but this is just how I feel about this novel. I've been reading almost since the beginning, and I've just longing for the author to come up with more story telling that doesn't involve near useless random/stepping stone characters. Thanks for your time. :]

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