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GodlykserLv17yr
2017-07-28 13:48

tl;dr - used to be good, now it's crap that either makes no sense or is wasted chapters praising how much better the MC is than everyone else TMW started out really nicely, the world was well made, and the characters interesting - until about chapter 500, when I realized it's the same characters, with the same issues, same challenges - with different names. This used to be my favorite novel, but it's gotten so repetitive and monotone I can barely force myself to read it. The Author's original Martial World (it's on Wuxia World) is fantastic, but it seems that he's out of ideas, and simply wastes whole chapters sucking up to the MC, showing how cool he is, keeping calm at all situations and has the devil's tongue, rendering everyone speechless with his witty answers, instead of progressing the non-existent plot. It appears the author simply makes things up as he goes, and has no concrete idea what he wants to do aside from adding infinite plot-armor to the MC, to show he is infinitely better than everyone else in the story. Also, like several other reviews mentioned, it appears as if no one aside from the MC has a functioning brain, speaking for no reason and doing dumb **** only to prop up the MC, to showcase his incredibleness. So far I'm still reading, hoping this novel will crawl its way out of the hole it dug itself.

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LeymaxLv10

I completely agree, if the author just drop that at those 500 chapter the story would be a great story. NO need to mix with the bad chapters later on.

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ShouldBeStudyingLv13

Torally agree, only that the story becomes sh1t after just circa 200 chapters (when the beast horde appears out of nowhere and the Tai Ah kingdom that lasted some TENS OF MILLIONS years is revealed to be just backwater place)

AsusnextLv5

Sad but true

PaidThePriceLv11

Difference between martial world and true martial world? Just that the cultivation seems to be different. I agree after that it got boring.

kumadamLv6

It gets pretty annoying when all his enemies just turns out to be idiots tho they have powerful cultivation. Or how mc get to experience tons of new stuff such as living as someone for years and yet after he wakes up, he’s still the same douche and nothing changed. I don’t even know what this novel is trying to achieve. I’m still at chapter 500+, should I continue?

FreeTrialLv6

Yeah i agree And btw most people must be forgot Yi Yun was from earth with good culinary skill, but just for the early chapters.

IlaygagorLv3

Yi Yun lost his personality.

DarkPresentLv6

I have no idea why he was even made as a person from earth... What was the reason for making him reincarnated person if after few first chapters it have 0 impact on the story... Just so uou could add reincarnation tag?

crimson1320Lv5

Goodreply

SquadzoneLv11

Haaa

ExtrovertLonerLv5

Oh

almandLv13

The biggest problem is that they lost a lot of the comedy it used to have

AurasLv10

Any novel this long has its flaws

rilianLv10

Yea but i can't find every chapter like worth all the word to read in it, like coiling dragon or i shall seal the heaven they worth every word

Auras:Any novel this long has its flaws
Myriad_SovereignLv5

What do u know. U got no taste....

FreekbeastLv5

I heard there's ntr related to the prequel so I didn't touch this (synopsis"together with loved one) can someone tell me whether this is true?

PandaAppleLv3

Ahh perceptions delusions you are a fine mix of this as this is an opinion And you don’t point out what’s wrong sooo yeah btw if you use the level card I’d like you to know it doesn’t matter who agrees?

Myriad_Sovereign:What do u know. U got no taste....
Red_ButtLv4

Jeez finaly i can agree with someone ... i already drop this novel for 6 month , when TMW still at WW because of amazing filler , but i was catch up at AGM and need new novel for waiting the chapter ... can someone give me some recomended novel please ...

YarvicLv5

Latest chapter here, no progress, Author is getting dumb.. the story is a waste of time now.

PapiJisasLv6

ι lιĸe мarтιal world. вυт ι donт ĸnow нoe тo ғeel aвoυт тнιѕ one.

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moehawkmanLv3

The main reason I gave this novel such a low rating is that the author seems to constantly forget about previous things that YY has learned and/or characters that contribute to his power ups. One key example is his aspect totem, the 9 neonate. It is supposed to grow along with YY since it is a "beast mark of life" which allowed it to go through a heavenly tribulation back in the Tian Yuan world. However, nothing has happened to it since then. YY has grown multiple realms (nearly 4 full realms if I'm not wrong), but the 9 neo is still at the 1st tribulation which doesn't make any sense. He has eaten how many high level resources and nothing made it go through the 2nd tribulation? I call BS. Another example is the godly OP bow he received from the God Advent Tower spirit. From what I remember, it was made from divine beast parts which is on the same level of his 3-legged golden crow(don't quote me on this, didn't feel like re-reading that whole arc for this review). YY could use around 5-10% of its power when he was at the yuan opening realm(again, don't quote me on that), but he has never even touched the bow since leaving the Tian Yuan world. It's almost safe to assume that the author completely forgot about the bow entirely. Lastly, I gave this novel this rating because the author once said back when this novel used to be on GravityTales that he would flush out the main story within 500-800 chapters. This notice was around chapter 550 or so, but I have yet to see where the main story is supposed to go. I can see that YY will fight with the White Lunar Empire soon and obviously win due to plot armor and 1337 hax, but nothing about what happens from there. There is no big bad enemy at the end of the tunnel, no dark forces watching from the shadows, nothing so much as an inkling of knowledge on who/what YY will be fighting to end the story. I guess you could say that I've been waiting for something to be revealed and yet I feel disappointed every time. You could take my rant/review for a grain of salt, but this is just how I feel about this novel. I've been reading almost since the beginning, and I've just longing for the author to come up with more story telling that doesn't involve near useless random/stepping stone characters. Thanks for your time. :]

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