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Daoist_Niklas
Daoist_NiklasLv37yr
2017-08-02 12:37

Good story with nice character development, just a shame that Qidian has started with ad crap, i will have to drop this and 2 other novels i read on Qidian since i refuse to watch ads just to read novels, a shame really. If they want money they should get it through paypal/Patreon or through REAL bonus chapters and not the daily releases, what a joke.

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GlassFox
GlassFoxLv6

If I were you, I'd cry even harder.. maybe that'll help.

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mh4n
mh4nLv5

suit ur self, its ur loss i dont know why so many complain about the add, just silent ur phone n drink ur coffe or tea n its all gone. u can go to the jungle or mountain for 1 month n come back to read again add free. but again its ur choice. but man come one where in the hell do you not see any add nowdays its everywhere.

redbeen
redbeenLv4

well now the novel is going premium so

KJGrenadier
KJGrenadierLv6

Better the option to either watch an ad or pay stones, than when they go premium and only give you the option to pay stones. I'd rather not have to pay for these chapters, so I either support through ads, or just wait until chapters become free.

Reached_The_Apex_
Reached_The_Apex_Lv10

I pity you, no one is forcing you to stay up to date, read other novels and pickup ad chapters for free at a later date.

Fangboy
FangboyLv3

Good....................................................

Samuel12
Samuel12Lv1

How are you doing today

Sn1p3s2
Sn1p3s2Lv14

That's kinda petty

bernZ27
bernZ27Lv10

update pls

bernZ27
bernZ27Lv10

more update

Lannydar
LannydarLv14

Realy good Story, like it.

Myriad_Sovereign
Myriad_SovereignLv5

One Hell of a story

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moehawkman
moehawkmanLv3

The main reason I gave this novel such a low rating is that the author seems to constantly forget about previous things that YY has learned and/or characters that contribute to his power ups. One key example is his aspect totem, the 9 neonate. It is supposed to grow along with YY since it is a "beast mark of life" which allowed it to go through a heavenly tribulation back in the Tian Yuan world. However, nothing has happened to it since then. YY has grown multiple realms (nearly 4 full realms if I'm not wrong), but the 9 neo is still at the 1st tribulation which doesn't make any sense. He has eaten how many high level resources and nothing made it go through the 2nd tribulation? I call BS. Another example is the godly OP bow he received from the God Advent Tower spirit. From what I remember, it was made from divine beast parts which is on the same level of his 3-legged golden crow(don't quote me on this, didn't feel like re-reading that whole arc for this review). YY could use around 5-10% of its power when he was at the yuan opening realm(again, don't quote me on that), but he has never even touched the bow since leaving the Tian Yuan world. It's almost safe to assume that the author completely forgot about the bow entirely. Lastly, I gave this novel this rating because the author once said back when this novel used to be on GravityTales that he would flush out the main story within 500-800 chapters. This notice was around chapter 550 or so, but I have yet to see where the main story is supposed to go. I can see that YY will fight with the White Lunar Empire soon and obviously win due to plot armor and 1337 hax, but nothing about what happens from there. There is no big bad enemy at the end of the tunnel, no dark forces watching from the shadows, nothing so much as an inkling of knowledge on who/what YY will be fighting to end the story. I guess you could say that I've been waiting for something to be revealed and yet I feel disappointed every time. You could take my rant/review for a grain of salt, but this is just how I feel about this novel. I've been reading almost since the beginning, and I've just longing for the author to come up with more story telling that doesn't involve near useless random/stepping stone characters. Thanks for your time. :]

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