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NeverfoundLv107yr
2017-06-29 16:44

It started really fckin good. Like, too good to not read. Then it starts to get repetitive, but still readable. Author made new arc! The locals are crazy rapist anarchist MF! MC take control! Add more insignificant harem members and characters! Author ruined the series! Really, the first 200 chp was sooooooo good. Then the communist propaganda starts, which is kind of gross but still acceptable. Then, the point where author just start assuming all people other than Chinese are just rapist anarchist shameless crazy people. Being nationalistic is great, author. But being stupidly racist is not. Yes, racist. YOU assumed 90% of the population are just rapist MF. I mean, do you even look at ur own country? Now, count the criminal and there you go. A rough data for apocalypse. Just multiply it by 5 and u get it. And then u realize, that ur own country has a **** ton more than the one u accuse for being full of rapist. Haha. Really tho, i was so disapointed with this. If i only read till c200. I probably would've made this review full of praises and 4 or 5 stars. But u know? Author ruined it. Drop it before c300. Just read till the Vietnam arc and be done. Don't continue and treat it as finished. Author, u ruined a series with huge potential by ****** it repetitive and biased. Read > Vietnam arc > Done Trust me, u would not want go further than that.

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FreiyaBurnsRedLv1

You see as repetitive as that is through the Vietnam Arc and the other arcs, It is showing humans Bad Side in many ways. Also of course because the Japanese hate the Chinese and vice versa their is much discriminatory. However you have to expect that (most) but not all chinese writers bash the Japanese or have their little bit of "pride" when their Chinese MC kills Japanese or destroys the Japanese territories. None the less this story is still good. it's repetitive now and it's repetitive 500 chapters later. Z2 opens up Yue Zhong dominates it, Z3 opens up Yue Zhong flees and then Z3 portals open up on Z1 (Earth) Yue Zhong later Dominates Z3. Etc etc etc. Story will forever be good however all novels are like this. TMW,ISSTH,WDQK MC'S go to new territories/ascend and dominate such thing. What do you expect the author to spend 1-4 month's ****** a brand new idea while getting the fire from us readers for no new chapters?

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NeverfoundLv10

Dude, AC did very great with almost (if not completely) no repetitive story.

FreiyaBurnsRed:You see as repetitive as that is through the Vietnam Arc and the other arcs, It is showing humans Bad Side in many ways. Also of course because the Japanese hate the Chinese and vice versa their is much discriminatory. However you have to expect that (most) but not all chinese writers bash the Japanese or have their little bit of "pride" when their Chinese MC kills Japanese or destroys the Japanese territories. None the less this story is still good. it's repetitive now and it's repetitive 500 chapters later. Z2 opens up Yue Zhong dominates it, Z3 opens up Yue Zhong flees and then Z3 portals open up on Z1 (Earth) Yue Zhong later Dominates Z3. Etc etc etc. Story will forever be good however all novels are like this. TMW,ISSTH,WDQK MC'S go to new territories/ascend and dominate such thing. What do you expect the author to spend 1-4 month's ****** a brand new idea while getting the fire from us readers for no new chapters?
FreiyaBurnsRedLv1

*Triggered* That's true although i'm not up to date with AC. Then again not all authors can do that, Eventually there'll be a time when AC will run into some repetition here and there all books have it. Some more than others G&DW is one of those that repetition is where it's long chapter count comes from (which i have never denied) But the thing is it's a world of absolute corruption dog eat dog. So it's bound to be repetitive in it's arc with Yue Zhong going out dominating China and other countries. And then later dominating other Zones etc.

Neverfound:Dude, AC did very great with almost (if not completely) no repetitive story.
Lou_TLv4

It's not that that the author is racist, he's just taken into consideration past events where wars between countries and even within their own brought out the worst in people. Sure he seems biased in a way due to his frequent references of events in chinese history where they were subject to racial discrimation, but the general idea of it is to relate to his market which is the chinese, its a chinese novel after all. He's used human actions throughout history as a tool for characterisation for his fiction story, nothing wrong with that, it even serves as a lesson in some way. It's fucking fiction man, you either enjoy or you pick up something else to read. Don't be so triggered and pick up something else to read :)

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NeverfoundLv10

I'm still reading this dude. always up to date. This novel is sooo fun. The racist and bias are cons. You said that it's "how apocalypse would be", i know, this one is very realistic. But still, can an ENTIRE RACE be rapist murderer MF? That's the part that i'm mad about, if only, at least the author make it so at leadst there's some good people in the race, then i'm good. But well, still fun, still read. Just telling the pros and cons.

Lou_T:It's not that that the author is racist, he's just taken into consideration past events where wars between countries and even within their own brought out the worst in people. Sure he seems biased in a way due to his frequent references of events in chinese history where they were subject to racial discrimation, but the general idea of it is to relate to his market which is the chinese, its a chinese novel after all. He's used human actions throughout history as a tool for characterisation for his fiction story, nothing wrong with that, it even serves as a lesson in some way. It's fucking fiction man, you either enjoy or you pick up something else to read. Don't be so triggered and pick up something else to read :)
Lou_TLv4

Nah, I never said it's how an apocalypse would be. I said it's how the author chose to depict it using examples in human history and whatever research he did to create the apocalypse theme he has. Yeah its big on racism, but then again, everyone is bound to be biased given the context of wars between nations, survival, and other apocalyptic ****.

Neverfound:I'm still reading this dude. always up to date. This novel is sooo fun. The racist and bias are cons. You said that it's "how apocalypse would be", i know, this one is very realistic. But still, can an ENTIRE RACE be rapist murderer MF? That's the part that i'm mad about, if only, at least the author make it so at leadst there's some good people in the race, then i'm good. But well, still fun, still read. Just telling the pros and cons.
LoktarOgarLv4

Probably the lack of internet and **** turned everyone into rapists

Neverfound:I'm still reading this dude. always up to date. This novel is sooo fun. The racist and bias are cons. You said that it's "how apocalypse would be", i know, this one is very realistic. But still, can an ENTIRE RACE be rapist murderer MF? That's the part that i'm mad about, if only, at least the author make it so at leadst there's some good people in the race, then i'm good. But well, still fun, still read. Just telling the pros and cons.
LoktarOgarLv4

That word is censored? Hmmm... lack of "***** videos"?

Neverfound:I'm still reading this dude. always up to date. This novel is sooo fun. The racist and bias are cons. You said that it's "how apocalypse would be", i know, this one is very realistic. But still, can an ENTIRE RACE be rapist murderer MF? That's the part that i'm mad about, if only, at least the author make it so at leadst there's some good people in the race, then i'm good. But well, still fun, still read. Just telling the pros and cons.
LoktarOgarLv4

Wtf. Why is "ad ult" censored!

Neverfound:I'm still reading this dude. always up to date. This novel is sooo fun. The racist and bias are cons. You said that it's "how apocalypse would be", i know, this one is very realistic. But still, can an ENTIRE RACE be rapist murderer MF? That's the part that i'm mad about, if only, at least the author make it so at leadst there's some good people in the race, then i'm good. But well, still fun, still read. Just telling the pros and cons.
DycoLv11

If by AC you mean absolute choice it's not that good bra

Neverfound:Dude, AC did very great with almost (if not completely) no repetitive story.
Daoist_LongnoseLv5

I'm pretty sure the author is racist gdw looks a lot like a wish fulillment story to me. And I don't think that he did any research at all the whole apocalypse = asshole+rapist is a hollywood tendency(would likely be different in reality in a developed country at least, even if china can't really be called a santuary of human right I don't think that it will fall that hard) and the rest come from his bias against the world.

Lou_T:Nah, I never said it's how an apocalypse would be. I said it's how the author chose to depict it using examples in human history and whatever research he did to create the apocalypse theme he has. Yeah its big on racism, but then again, everyone is bound to be biased given the context of wars between nations, survival, and other apocalyptic ****.
XamarLv13

I agree the repetitive can be found in the few starting ark, but now everything changed. I think the author saw is own mistakes and changed the plot but wrote too fast his story this his why it's look the same a few time. But for me, near all novels got this problem at least a few time or in the whole story. It is not only in novel, but everything wich is done to fast like manga ( first of all DBZ) , movies etc... So i am sad your rating is this low! Even more when i read you are still reading because "this novel is sooo fun".

NeverfoundLv10

It is fun. But the repetitive plot are so frustating. Just like how i hate dragon ball, naruto, one piece, and some other stretched series. If only the author decided to not make a **** ton of filler(yes it is fillers). For couple of chapters i would be enjoying it so hard that i read every details of it. But the majority is only me scrolling down skipping on useless words and character introduction.

Xamar:I agree the repetitive can be found in the few starting ark, but now everything changed. I think the author saw is own mistakes and changed the plot but wrote too fast his story this his why it's look the same a few time. But for me, near all novels got this problem at least a few time or in the whole story. It is not only in novel, but everything wich is done to fast like manga ( first of all DBZ) , movies etc... So i am sad your rating is this low! Even more when i read you are still reading because "this novel is sooo fun".
XamarLv13

Yes i get it, but i really dont think it the worst with useless word,there a many like this : MGA, IRAS ...

theanimemailLv10

Ya no.

Neverfound:Dude, AC did very great with almost (if not completely) no repetitive story.
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anonymity12Lv11

I’m going to drop this novel and here’s why- 1. Plot armor is not a plot and the MC gets things done not because the author thought of a clever way for the character to achieve his aims but because the author just said aha he wins again. 2. The supporting cast is absolutely ridiculous there no real attempt made to develop any of the thousands of them and they get brought into play at whim and discarded again. 3. With the game elements leveling system if your going to make a system don’t just make your character a cheat of the system although this could fall partly under plot armor. Even at the start the author broke the ‘rules’ for the number of abilities and it’s not even worth trying to figure out how broken the MC is after the first few hundred chapters. With all that said ironically if you look up the actual start of the story up til about where it gets picked up on this site it actually is an entertaining read.

BlackMamba0024Lv12

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FreeTrialLv6

LoL multiple by 5 and u get it? MF u didn't even know what apocalypse mean Have you watching with your own eyes a racism riots that women getting gang rap3d on road, building set on fire people get killed?? Then you flee to other island, but 3 years later another riots/race war happen and you saw a little kid using human head as soccer ball? The old one eating human heart This is not a story but a history That really happened

thedudeisttLv4

repetitive? Are you saying that taking over and unifying a country, dealing with the same types of people, and taking over the same types of cities over and over, and fighting the same enemy over and over isnt supposed to be repetitive? Not mention while the women are in his harem, its not really a harem. Its more like women that he occasionally sleeps with that either work on his territories or dont. You really should catch up.

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What2readLv2

Man after reading some of these comments on this site I've got to wonder if the people have their head on straight. Firstly the people of asian descent from the countries of China, Vietnam, Japan, etc are all of the same race. Discrimination amongst themselves is not called racism. Second, this about what happens in a post apocalyptic world where everything has gone to hell in a hand basket and all law and order breaks down. This is a place where the strong devour the weak, evil men commit evil acts and people will do anything they can to survive. In this kind of setting, it's only natural some people would devolve into tribalism and militancy. It's entirely as expected. Moreover as the author pointed out, nationalism and tribalism are useful methods to obtain recruits. The downside been, it results in tremendous suffering for the group of people been targeted as scapegoats. Now when the MC encounters his people been victimised by these groups, he naturally gets outraged and retaliates. But this is no different than the way he dealt with the numerous bandit groups in the past. Furthermore unlike what some commentators are implying, he did not go slaughtering everyone like a maniac. After defeating the groups, he only singled out the perpetrators of the crimes to be executed, thus fairly dealing out even-handed justice and bringing closure to the victims. The rest who were not involved were able to join his group without discrimination for good food and promotion, just as long as they were willing to work and follow his orders. Frankly if the author had actually used country A, country B, like Japanese authors do. Nobody would of batted an eyelid. Only when it's China been used you got all these haters coming out of the woodwork. I suspect it has something to do with too much anti-China propaganda in the western media.

Daoist_LongnoseLv5

I had a read of that story long ago, a hundred chapters or something, what I remember is that it's a trash story written by a trash author, where everybody is an asshole and the mc is a bit less an asshole so he shines like a rock in a turd. You don't need to read very far in that story to see the reality of what the author truly wishes to express, basically he uses the excuse of returning to the primal world to explain his view on gender equality, racial equality and patriotism but well many are patriotic so that point is not really important. Basically, after a week in the apocalypse, you can expect Everybody to turn into a crazy asshole because if history taught us something, it's that we are better at being auto destructive assholes than to help each other and make a society. women degraded as cows in a world with a magic system that makes them more equal to men than they have ever been, we men all know that right, even with an ak47 in their hand's women has no survival instinct they are just good to suck big d*ck. situations where strangers that are very arrogant, lazy and weak got their deserved punishment because we all know that white, black or Japanese skins make you extremely arrogant and stupid even after the apocalypse in a country where they are a minority because for some reason minority rules right. And more than anything you can expect a narrator that possess the power to bend logic and make the mc appear right and just instead of a little ****. Seriously the logic bending in that novel is what kills me, to all little cunts that can't help but say ho another triggered SJW, I like heavy stuff, but more than that I like a novel when they are realistic, well-constructed and also honest with itself. I don't mind reading stories with rape and all others crazy ****, but I really hate when the mc do obviously dark **** and having the omniscient narrator explaining to me just how much right the mc is.

HellequinLv15

Ok. First after looking at so many negative reviews on here about propaganda this, or repeating that, or racist view point, i have to say that all of you are extremely, extremely stupid and narrow minded. Also you need to go demand back any money you may have paid for any educational expenses, as it was a waste. Now let me break this down into easy to understand thoughts for you. China has had a really, really, REALLY messed up history in dealing with most of the world. The Japanese have attacked multiple times and occupied in a ruthless and basically evil fashion. They made all Chinese people who didn't demean themselves to the Japanese into lowest form of life or damn near slaves. They have also had conflict with Vietnam in bloody war and have had deep long lasting hatred between them for a long time. Oh and lets not forget that America, Europe and Japan even jointly occupied china and deemed the Chinese as " sick yellow men of the east". Now as fir the B.S. of saying there is communistic propaganda that is laughable. Lets look at the MC. He is from a communist country, right? So what do you think he will do after forming his own group? Do like the idiots in the cave that, thru "democracy", had the strongest guy be treated like garbage while he did all the work to get food and supplies? Screw that noise!!! I am with the MC, if i have the power then i would be in charge and those that I care for and can trust will run things with me. Also this is the apocalypse for crying out loud. The more hands trying to steer the ship the less stable the course will be, as everyone will think they know best. Also, if you notice though he is in charge he is not stupid and listens to the advise and counseling of those around that have good charater and have shown that they put the welfare of the people before their own greed. And he doesn't kill for no reason either. He shows mercy to those who do not fight him, and is ruthless to any that dare to be a threat to his people's well-being. The only others that incur his wrath are those who do or have done unforgivable horrors. (Example: the people in Vietnam that were teaching kids to see Chinese people as food or things that have no value.) Now as for how it looks like everyone other then him is evil or racist or morally corrupt, that has not been shown. All that has been shown is that some people have very dark corners to them and if they have nothing to keep them in check, they will give into their more sinister side. So there you go. Now you should be able to understand things a little better. So before you go spouting off nonsensical thoughts, next time maybe try to understand the overall picture or setting.

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