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_ZenithLv117yr
2017-09-10 09:48

4.4 - Dark - Worth a read! Not for the light of heart or social justice warriors. Blood, gore, killing, rape and pretty much the darkest side of humanity you can expect. Humans are mutating, adapting, evolving and... Surviving, no thanks to the hordes of zombies and other creatures trying to constantly kill them. The world is ever changing, mostly based on hordes of zombies. Creatures have very little similarities with their old selves as they mutate and evolve. The story is a bit repetitive and the characters do not always change and adapt according to what the reader wishes, but ultimately none of us could really tell what we'd be like or who we'd turn into in an apocalypse setting.

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XamarLv13

Sad i thaught you ll get 3rd place and kick Edge review away, but people keep miss understanding this novel....

_ZenithLv11

Haha well I didn't write the review to replace anyone's! But people need to know, novels aren't made to cater to them - stories are created from a spark of creativity, and they go in the direction that they were meant to - not to kneel before any specific person or group's interests, but through the plot of that spark that created it all! This novel has tons of content that people may not be able to stomach, or enjoy. That's okay! There are tons of other novels, go enjoy them! :) BUT I read the background, the setting, the plot! Things are not supposed to be happy, innocent, or easy. It's dark. It's violent. Sexist. Racist. It's almost even evil! It's the end of the world, people. Don't expect rainbows and unicorns.

Xamar:Sad i thaught you ll get 3rd place and kick Edge review away, but people keep miss understanding this novel....
XamarLv13

Nooooo ... dont tell me YZ wont tame a unicorn and ride the rainbow in a perfect ending with his harem ! T-T

_Zenith:Haha well I didn't write the review to replace anyone's! But people need to know, novels aren't made to cater to them - stories are created from a spark of creativity, and they go in the direction that they were meant to - not to kneel before any specific person or group's interests, but through the plot of that spark that created it all! This novel has tons of content that people may not be able to stomach, or enjoy. That's okay! There are tons of other novels, go enjoy them! :) BUT I read the background, the setting, the plot! Things are not supposed to be happy, innocent, or easy. It's dark. It's violent. Sexist. Racist. It's almost even evil! It's the end of the world, people. Don't expect rainbows and unicorns.
NaasLv4

You are clearly misunderstanding peoples frustrations with this garbage story. It had maybe one of the best beginnings but then the communist propaganda and copy paste plot started happening. It’s not so much racist but nationalist, also surprisingly he has a massive harem which I guess he just deflowers then they fking disappear. This is a chinese/communist power fantasy/rapefetish wet dream.

_Zenith:Haha well I didn't write the review to replace anyone's! But people need to know, novels aren't made to cater to them - stories are created from a spark of creativity, and they go in the direction that they were meant to - not to kneel before any specific person or group's interests, but through the plot of that spark that created it all! This novel has tons of content that people may not be able to stomach, or enjoy. That's okay! There are tons of other novels, go enjoy them! :) BUT I read the background, the setting, the plot! Things are not supposed to be happy, innocent, or easy. It's dark. It's violent. Sexist. Racist. It's almost even evil! It's the end of the world, people. Don't expect rainbows and unicorns.
_ZenithLv11

Well, you could always decide to just not read it. Not that hard right? Let others enjoy even if you cannot :)

Naas:You are clearly misunderstanding peoples frustrations with this garbage story. It had maybe one of the best beginnings but then the communist propaganda and copy paste plot started happening. It’s not so much racist but nationalist, also surprisingly he has a massive harem which I guess he just deflowers then they fking disappear. This is a chinese/communist power fantasy/rapefetish wet dream.
NaasLv4

That’s not how reviews work. It’s not just saying good things or saying nothing at all. People review this book so others know how it really is. Calling people that doesn’t like this garbage weak or social justice warrior like some retards do in the comments section is stupid. No story in this site is without bloodshed or massacres, wtf kind of dumbass doesn’t know this. I’m not reading it at the moment, but I still wanted people to honestly know what was in this book so they will not waste their time like me. I read up to chapter 400~ something and I gave up. If you can look past the plotholes, blatant propaganda and nationalism, repeated arcs and last but not least getting introduced to 1 new character per chapter that fking disappears after 100 chapters, then enjoy!

_Zenith:Well, you could always decide to just not read it. Not that hard right? Let others enjoy even if you cannot :)
Lazy_CatLv4

well such a humanity

sixerninerfivesLv4

So its just another ****tty Web novel full of unnecessary plot armor, repetitive arcs and the usual problems with most Web novels

Naas:That’s not how reviews work. It’s not just saying good things or saying nothing at all. People review this book so others know how it really is. Calling people that doesn’t like this garbage weak or social justice warrior like some retards do in the comments section is stupid. No story in this site is without bloodshed or massacres, wtf kind of dumbass doesn’t know this. I’m not reading it at the moment, but I still wanted people to honestly know what was in this book so they will not waste their time like me. I read up to chapter 400~ something and I gave up. If you can look past the plotholes, blatant propaganda and nationalism, repeated arcs and last but not least getting introduced to 1 new character per chapter that fking disappears after 100 chapters, then enjoy!
TearsOfRoseLv11

Actually you're right and wrong there. Everyone has their own opinion and their way of thinking. I'm the type of person where if someone offends me if i saw them about to be hit by a car i wouldn't help them. Thus the dark side and "evil" of this book matches my character of returning insults with SEVERE PAYBACK. Also yes Social Justice Warriors will not like this kind of thing. Also who gives a flying fuk if there is propaganda or not. OUR FKING GOVERNMENTS LIVE OFF PROPAGANDA AND YOU HAVE NO PROBLEM WITH IT? BUT you have a PROBLEM when a book has PROPAGANDA? Fuking childish.

Naas:That’s not how reviews work. It’s not just saying good things or saying nothing at all. People review this book so others know how it really is. Calling people that doesn’t like this garbage weak or social justice warrior like some retards do in the comments section is stupid. No story in this site is without bloodshed or massacres, wtf kind of dumbass doesn’t know this. I’m not reading it at the moment, but I still wanted people to honestly know what was in this book so they will not waste their time like me. I read up to chapter 400~ something and I gave up. If you can look past the plotholes, blatant propaganda and nationalism, repeated arcs and last but not least getting introduced to 1 new character per chapter that fking disappears after 100 chapters, then enjoy!
NaasLv4

Are you actually mentally challenged? You see killing off an entire people for something some of them did a long time ago okay? You should read mein kampf, it’s your kind of book pal. The propaganda here is that chinese=good, rest of the world=di*kheads and savages. Unless you’re chinese or a ”social justice warrior” you will not like the book. Why should someone think it’s ok that some commie fu*k is writing sh*t and not voice complaints? Is this review page only for people like you that like to di*kride these authors? Have a good day comrade and keep on communisming🙏😉

TearsOfRose:Actually you're right and wrong there. Everyone has their own opinion and their way of thinking. I'm the type of person where if someone offends me if i saw them about to be hit by a car i wouldn't help them. Thus the dark side and "evil" of this book matches my character of returning insults with SEVERE PAYBACK. Also yes Social Justice Warriors will not like this kind of thing. Also who gives a flying fuk if there is propaganda or not. OUR FKING GOVERNMENTS LIVE OFF PROPAGANDA AND YOU HAVE NO PROBLEM WITH IT? BUT you have a PROBLEM when a book has PROPAGANDA? Fuking childish.
TearsOfRoseLv11

Who said everyone has to be a Saint in life? But I don't believe ending a entire race/nationality for something done in the past is excusable. If it was a full out war between 2 nationalities than obviously 1 won't stop till the other is wiped out completely. Like I said this book isn't for people like you with a clean heart

Naas:Are you actually mentally challenged? You see killing off an entire people for something some of them did a long time ago okay? You should read mein kampf, it’s your kind of book pal. The propaganda here is that chinese=good, rest of the world=di*kheads and savages. Unless you’re chinese or a ”social justice warrior” you will not like the book. Why should someone think it’s ok that some commie fu*k is writing sh*t and not voice complaints? Is this review page only for people like you that like to di*kride these authors? Have a good day comrade and keep on communisming🙏😉
BlackMamba0024Lv12

Thanks

anonymity12Lv11

I don’t mind the dark elements of the novel, it’s the fact that it’s poorly written that I take issue with. It really does start out strong maybe the first 80-120 chapters develop fairly well then it’s all plot armor and scattershot ideas. I seriously wonder if someone gave the ‘author’ a rough draft with a detailed beginning and let him continue.

_ZenithLv11

I can accept that response, some of the segments of the story ARE poorly written and I cannot argue with it. I just got really into it and am unwilling to put it down, at least you're not blinded by the dark evolution people take at the end of the world. I can't believe people judge a DARK end of the world story with the same sort of stereotypes and ideals of the current world, it's beyond me lol

anonymity12:I don’t mind the dark elements of the novel, it’s the fact that it’s poorly written that I take issue with. It really does start out strong maybe the first 80-120 chapters develop fairly well then it’s all plot armor and scattershot ideas. I seriously wonder if someone gave the ‘author’ a rough draft with a detailed beginning and let him continue.
anonymity12Lv11

I’m still trying to slog through the novel, though I will admit it is painful. One of the hardest things to do in an ‘epic’ story is to take the time to actually give characters enough background to make the world seem alive. This author just comes up with names for the MC to turn into meat paste. If he is going to murder his way to the top, great, but seeing him defeat rival after rival because... well just BECAUSE is annoying. I’ve actually started looking through the MCs use of abilities in combat just to see if the author even tries to color within his own lines and I wish I could find exactly where the cost of his abilities were labeled because his devil flames alone tend to use up most of his spirit, then there are all the vanishing steps and occasional gravity effect that he uses in combat that as best I can tell fr others abilities he uses about half again as much spirit as he has. But that’s how I get when an author just throws out the notion of crafting a solid story. I also know from reading on other sites the first chapters the translators and editors also had the same issue.

_Zenith:I can accept that response, some of the segments of the story ARE poorly written and I cannot argue with it. I just got really into it and am unwilling to put it down, at least you're not blinded by the dark evolution people take at the end of the world. I can't believe people judge a DARK end of the world story with the same sort of stereotypes and ideals of the current world, it's beyond me lol
ArrryLv10

This story has the most overpowered zombies ever in a fictional setting. Love reading about the MC adapting and coping with them with his ingenious strategies.

Snow3POLv3

Ppl too serious. The novel is was fun to read.

Namelessking02Lv5

bro why is done have chpter 1?

_ZenithLv11

The first chapters not listed here were done by a different group, or group(s) - It's been a long time since I read them so I can't really recall where to find them, but you can search for the Novel on novelupdates.com and find links to the earlier chapters! :)

Namelessking02:bro why is done have chpter 1?
Namelessking02Lv5

where a can find more group..?

_Zenith:The first chapters not listed here were done by a different group, or group(s) - It's been a long time since I read them so I can't really recall where to find them, but you can search for the Novel on novelupdates.com and find links to the earlier chapters! :)
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What2readLv2

Man after reading some of these comments on this site I've got to wonder if the people have their head on straight. Firstly the people of asian descent from the countries of China, Vietnam, Japan, etc are all of the same race. Discrimination amongst themselves is not called racism. Second, this about what happens in a post apocalyptic world where everything has gone to hell in a hand basket and all law and order breaks down. This is a place where the strong devour the weak, evil men commit evil acts and people will do anything they can to survive. In this kind of setting, it's only natural some people would devolve into tribalism and militancy. It's entirely as expected. Moreover as the author pointed out, nationalism and tribalism are useful methods to obtain recruits. The downside been, it results in tremendous suffering for the group of people been targeted as scapegoats. Now when the MC encounters his people been victimised by these groups, he naturally gets outraged and retaliates. But this is no different than the way he dealt with the numerous bandit groups in the past. Furthermore unlike what some commentators are implying, he did not go slaughtering everyone like a maniac. After defeating the groups, he only singled out the perpetrators of the crimes to be executed, thus fairly dealing out even-handed justice and bringing closure to the victims. The rest who were not involved were able to join his group without discrimination for good food and promotion, just as long as they were willing to work and follow his orders. Frankly if the author had actually used country A, country B, like Japanese authors do. Nobody would of batted an eyelid. Only when it's China been used you got all these haters coming out of the woodwork. I suspect it has something to do with too much anti-China propaganda in the western media.

Daoist_LongnoseLv5

I had a read of that story long ago, a hundred chapters or something, what I remember is that it's a trash story written by a trash author, where everybody is an asshole and the mc is a bit less an asshole so he shines like a rock in a turd. You don't need to read very far in that story to see the reality of what the author truly wishes to express, basically he uses the excuse of returning to the primal world to explain his view on gender equality, racial equality and patriotism but well many are patriotic so that point is not really important. Basically, after a week in the apocalypse, you can expect Everybody to turn into a crazy asshole because if history taught us something, it's that we are better at being auto destructive assholes than to help each other and make a society. women degraded as cows in a world with a magic system that makes them more equal to men than they have ever been, we men all know that right, even with an ak47 in their hand's women has no survival instinct they are just good to suck big d*ck. situations where strangers that are very arrogant, lazy and weak got their deserved punishment because we all know that white, black or Japanese skins make you extremely arrogant and stupid even after the apocalypse in a country where they are a minority because for some reason minority rules right. And more than anything you can expect a narrator that possess the power to bend logic and make the mc appear right and just instead of a little ****. Seriously the logic bending in that novel is what kills me, to all little cunts that can't help but say ho another triggered SJW, I like heavy stuff, but more than that I like a novel when they are realistic, well-constructed and also honest with itself. I don't mind reading stories with rape and all others crazy ****, but I really hate when the mc do obviously dark **** and having the omniscient narrator explaining to me just how much right the mc is.

HellequinLv15

Ok. First after looking at so many negative reviews on here about propaganda this, or repeating that, or racist view point, i have to say that all of you are extremely, extremely stupid and narrow minded. Also you need to go demand back any money you may have paid for any educational expenses, as it was a waste. Now let me break this down into easy to understand thoughts for you. China has had a really, really, REALLY messed up history in dealing with most of the world. The Japanese have attacked multiple times and occupied in a ruthless and basically evil fashion. They made all Chinese people who didn't demean themselves to the Japanese into lowest form of life or damn near slaves. They have also had conflict with Vietnam in bloody war and have had deep long lasting hatred between them for a long time. Oh and lets not forget that America, Europe and Japan even jointly occupied china and deemed the Chinese as " sick yellow men of the east". Now as fir the B.S. of saying there is communistic propaganda that is laughable. Lets look at the MC. He is from a communist country, right? So what do you think he will do after forming his own group? Do like the idiots in the cave that, thru "democracy", had the strongest guy be treated like garbage while he did all the work to get food and supplies? Screw that noise!!! I am with the MC, if i have the power then i would be in charge and those that I care for and can trust will run things with me. Also this is the apocalypse for crying out loud. The more hands trying to steer the ship the less stable the course will be, as everyone will think they know best. Also, if you notice though he is in charge he is not stupid and listens to the advise and counseling of those around that have good charater and have shown that they put the welfare of the people before their own greed. And he doesn't kill for no reason either. He shows mercy to those who do not fight him, and is ruthless to any that dare to be a threat to his people's well-being. The only others that incur his wrath are those who do or have done unforgivable horrors. (Example: the people in Vietnam that were teaching kids to see Chinese people as food or things that have no value.) Now as for how it looks like everyone other then him is evil or racist or morally corrupt, that has not been shown. All that has been shown is that some people have very dark corners to them and if they have nothing to keep them in check, they will give into their more sinister side. So there you go. Now you should be able to understand things a little better. So before you go spouting off nonsensical thoughts, next time maybe try to understand the overall picture or setting.

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